lol i just thought it would be funny/fitting since the word was gooch. i cut the leg of the h on purpose, i dont think it would have looked right it it lined up perfect
i actually think that has some potential, ha. not that thats saying much coming from a toy like myself, but i digress. flu - hot shit as usual. quick simple. the K makes me want to smack babies, but meh...
first throwie with the new name, fucked up my handstlye eskimo - liken it, i prefer the white one flare - looks good, fix the e haze - lookin good keep it up klic - i know your probably tired of this, work on simples flu - don't force add-ons, they'll come gooch - wowww haha, i like the g crits please
drek/peg- NEW TO GRAFF THREAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! caer - good stuff man, but try to be more consistent with the thickness of your bars. i think that would make your ish look alot better, also i'd say loose the arrows. flu - the fill makes it look pretty nice, but the arrows are kind of out of place and extremely small. i think those kind of arrows would look real fresh with your letters if you make em bigger and not force em. also i don't know what you were going for with the drop shadow/3d or whatever, but it's hurtin. keep sketchin! that gooch sketch made me lol View attachment 417346 CHECK YA LATERRRR!!
flu- that shit looks waaay hotter with colour. eskimo- i dig that first one for sure bro caer- tell your buddy to try and do somethin with those characters man, they are tight. and your shit is lookin iilllll tono and klic - keep workin on it, proportions and flo...good ole classic bars lawl- make your letters more the same size.. pegcity- your throwie is confused, is it sharp lines, flowwy, euro....simplify that shit drek- what is that first letter....bars son! that gooch sketch made me laugh, i woulda made the skinny bar on the H shorter though, and then made the thick one longer... bumpin for more criiits
haha thanks. i did it for mainly some laughs. i came up with a G i actually kinda like and didnt know what to put with it. how about some crits on the style or the G? drek- not really feelin it man- lets see some simples from you J- i love your style mang
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FIN-Balls...wow...lmao hahahaha the "H's" legs need to be evened out and the balls...It would be good for a diss over some ones shiit...but it's creative. Librelikespie-You need work bro...You gotta keep at it cause it lacks structure. Drek-Sobs...hmmm...The lines are clean BUT the structure of the letters...try to be more unique with the structure. Peg-You definetly need to put in more time and more work...New names take time. Lawl-The bubbles look balanced and the letters are not bad. Keep it up. Sometin else I'm workin on...tell me what you think.
sprout : love the ''I'' but not shure I like how the M is, the bottom is... weird... ** and you forgot to colour the top 3d of the ''m''
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Better than that other whack shit you was doing ... Although i do think those letters are a fluke ... as its been quite evident for some time you carnt rock a decent simple letter ... so im still not convinced by you.
Well it only because I was trying to complicate them, if you look closely on my other sketchs and take off all the random shit on them, well theres the type stuff I did. They might just be a fluke, but I will be able to produce another good one ! Thanks.
wings u dont know shit bout shadows and its diraction 0.0 of shadow on the letters is totally off anyways its looks better BUT still do simple block letters make ur structure better keep working
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Im not going to do to BLOCK simples. Because I tend to like to bend my letters. And for my 3d stuff, and way to work on the shadows? I dont know much about it (Except for on people, but letters now this is something I havent done before).