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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. stretched

    stretched Member

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    so like what? basically the whole piece haha
    whatever i agree,
    maybe this one is better
     

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  2. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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    Your top K extension needs to stop inflating, your A looks like the delta sign aka a triangle, the extension between the K and A needs to be eliminated all together, the bottom bar of the K is dispoporitionate to the rest of the bar, the top of the A bar nees to be poportionate to the rest, your S is very generic and the top extension is dispoportionate to the rest of it, get rid of the connections between K, A and S, your E is, guess what? Dispopoprtionate all across the board. The curling of the E is uneeded and the 3D in this one seems more equal, but it still is not even. Your piece still lacks from and style. Work on letter structure, spacing and bars, a lot. Otherwise, the multicoloring is cool, but I'm not a fan of the scheme.

    Hope this helps you.
     
  3. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    bump for crits
     
  4. HAIRCUT

    HAIRCUT Banned

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    ai137.photobucket.com_albums_q226_hurricaneaty_DIPSET.jpg_88a01d1c7e9b4e704eb09552564ad95c.jpg
    fuck yr couch
    dipset
     
  5. CHEM

    CHEM New Member

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    yo who ever posted kase ; keep it up with the colors looks like ur headed in the right direction and add some dimension
     
  6. Juicy JSC

    Juicy JSC Member

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    I aint no cop holmes, cops are fucking wack, and I aint no 9 year old kid man, fuck that shit, but whatever thats cool that you say that because ive never met you and i guess you dont get my speech but thats just the way I talk bro. anyways, whats everyones verdict on legacy? I know clone has already killed it (litteraly 50% of that shit looks like it should be dead) but I got an A OK from clones to hit up a mad piece over one of his, but just cause there is so much shitty graff there I dont know if its worth it, so let me know if I should take time out of my life to hit it. and yo im kinda noob to this site, how the hell do you change your screen name( I want to switch from JUICY JSC, to JUNK JSC) so let me know.
     
  7. Hookr

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  8. HAIRCUT

    HAIRCUT Banned

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  9. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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    Give crits to get crits. Work on your letter structure.
     
  10. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Kase, I'm liking it, just keep sketching...
    Make all your bars thicker and try to go simpler.
    The shadow is dropped in almost all the right places
    now just make it alot bigger...
    that along with bigger bars will make the whole thing look alot better

    Erem, I'm glad your going out with the 3d it will get better...
    Focus on the letter structure, don't go so wild.
    The white forcefeild faided out makes it really stand out..
    next time do it before fill and outline, and it will look alot better.

    Juicy, quit talking in this thread it is made for posting pictures...
    go to "toy chat" or "toy questions" just not here..

    Flyt, what I said before goes for those 2 pieces to...
    dont write "fuck your couch, dipset" it looks rediculous.
    Make a better backround, just take more time
    The shadow is way off and can control needs work
    but I can't tell you what to do, that comes with time...
     
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  11. nastonE

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    that A would work well for a straight letter, the other letters need work, the letter thickness is all different throughout them and it's not proportionate, stick with a solid fill until you develope excellent letter structure with all the same width and all proportionate
     
  12. HAIRCUT

    HAIRCUT Banned

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    yes yes. thank you.

    i definitely did not write dipset fuck your couch. i painted it came back a few days later to flick, and that was on there.

    that would put me in the same league as dude who paints his truck.

    come on son.
     
  13. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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  14. nastonE

    nastonE Member

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    Dope roller man.. all those letters flow with each other and have the same style and so clean. maybe try to reduce the gap that's between the Y, is all i can say.

    stay up
     
  15. FIN one

    FIN one Senior Member

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    pyre that second one is pretty sick
     
  16. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    lol thanks. and that wasnt a roller piece either.
     
  17. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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  20. HAIRCUT

    HAIRCUT Banned

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    you shoulda dropped one of those in the bathroom, right in the toilet.