i call ppl older than me kid, it was not meant to come out as a bad thing. highschool art is really nothing unless thats all you did and actually apply it to ur graff.i took art classes all throughout highschool including advanced placement and IB courses. its what i planned on doin with my future until i got into music, but i still sucked balls at graff when i started regardless of my education. i knew the basics of form, perspective and lighing but had no idea what letter structure was. i never said u said u were jesus, you said that you would get shading down easy which in my opinion is ignorant. and if u were tryin to progress, you would listen to what ppl have been telling you man. but u really dont. no one expects u to please everyone, but u werent pleasing anyone. im not hating, im just tryin to make sure u listen t what ppl are telling you. i was similar when i first started then i realized that the ppl on here know what they're talkin about for the most part.
wings u said u like bending bars and addin shit to ur work right? but u dont know how to bend ur bars right and im not talking bout any other shit to add lets do like this u know show us that u know how to do prtty simple letters really simples... with no adds no arrows normal good bars
Werd, No lie, I'm feelin this. DOES need some work with the texture of your fill in. It could be cleaner with the colors...But it's a great start. Start tryin to use Decols Or Prismas. But the colors are dope, the letter structre is good, the only thing is personally the D is too sharp... like This Part of the (D<<) But all around it's str8. Keep it up.
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Wings ur shading looks like its commin from everywhere and ur 3d aint all that constant and ur letters aint rly flowin try workin on all those Dank ur names pretty played but im feelin that colour scheme View attachment 417687 View attachment 417688 View attachment 417689 View attachment 417690 View attachment 417691 some of my most recent stuff and for wings some of my 3D stuff View attachment 417692 View attachment 417693 View attachment 417694 View attachment 417695 View attachment 417696 crits?
not really feeling any of it man, but keep at it. it'll take time to develop a dope 3d style. also your hand is fucking wack, i'd say drop everything else and develop that. having a dope hand is one of the most important things in my opinion. people will wanna see more of your ish if you've got a dope hand. just my 2 cents, take it or leave it. well i'm off to class.
skin-digging that 3d style you got going....but maybe try and make the I curly like the other letters? montana- i like the simple View attachment 417738 View attachment 417739
I meh about this one. Ill keep working. View attachment 417740 Next sketch I got looks okay though . Im gone painting though today or tomorrow. Ps Ignore the bottom of the I, I was debating on what doing there...
yo evade I think you misunderstood wings' 3d. it's actually the letters that are 3d in themselves. like a simpler version of any 3d graff. correct me if I'm wrong but I just wanted to clarify because I like that piece (but the s gets too skinny for the context of the rest of the sketch.
bump for crits evade dope 3d, i like it fucking HATE this y [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020538.jpg CRITS
rays- ilike the s on the last one. wings- shit looks cool but i dont know much bout 3d so i cant really give you good critz and yes i know dank the name is played out. i dont really care, no one in my area uses it and more than likely ill end up changing it once ive progressed quite a bit more. anywho freestyle. 1 new sharpie and 1 new deco simples practice