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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. SageGSCnj

    SageGSCnj Member

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    Montana - I like the last 2. The first might be better if it was outlined for clarity....
    No1 - I like em just the A on the first one is a little too cut off...

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    The letters for mine couldve been closer and the A doesnt really work well...

    Crits?
     
  2. MontanaPainter

    MontanaPainter Elite Member

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  3. FIN one

    FIN one Senior Member

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    Kraft561 Member

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  6. FIN one

    FIN one Senior Member

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    it says two things really look in the middle of each letters. originally i didnt have those there and it looked pretty good but i was mad bored and little mad at the time. but like i said, no hard feelings. i wasnt expecting anything good to come out of this, personally, i dont think it looks good. but i havent posted anything in a while.

    GUBE- try to keep the letters the same length trhoughout.

    Dask- the a and k are slanted more than the d and s. try no to let the s overlap itself. myabe make the 3d a little fatter too?
     
  7. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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    Fin and your talking about me doing simples? Looks like you needa work on some your self, no hard feelings though ;). Also if it does why does it say skin?
    These are old. (1week maybe)
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  8. MontanaPainter

    MontanaPainter Elite Member

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  9. lawlcat

    lawlcat Senior Member

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    rays i like the second one more, the R could use some work though. i wouldnt put adds on yet for the first one too.
    skin your simps looks pretty good to me, ive never really had a problem with your stuff though.
    dask the K doesnt really go with the rest.
    gube keep on the simples, try getting your letters/bars the same size.
    fin i dont really like the mini letters inside of the letters.

    lazy simple, fucked up the bottom of the K.
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  10. MontanaPainter

    MontanaPainter Elite Member

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    make the top of the k thicker

    thx for the crit :)
     
  11. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Montana, the first blue and green one has great flow.
     
  12. Sadistic.Child

    Sadistic.Child Elite Member

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    when he fuckin felt like it
    you got a problem with FS?

    bash, fat slobz
     
  13. MontanaPainter

    MontanaPainter Elite Member

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    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  17. MontanaPainter

    MontanaPainter Elite Member

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    lulz

    proper your making me blush

    stop it!

    lulzdance
     
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    hal.cyon Senior Member

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  20. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    montana painter - rework your second letter. it looks kinda crammed. nice piece tho.
    jers - really like that piece especially the S. only thing is give your R some space cuz its a little crammed.
    zofone - love the colors on the second one. i would get rid of those red crosses and blocks around it tho.
    hal.cyon - i like the character and the piece. by the s it gets really crammed.
    jobr - im dont really like the first one but the second one is tight. nice tag too.