Lol resized.
Please crits lol?

 

Jster work on flowing the sharp letters with the round ones, name dosesent matter now but dont get that up yet

yarbles looks nice, top tags dope. im feeling the first name more than meka but keep sketching what you like and see what works

halo not bad keep sketching

ciats, looking good big, idk

and im out of paper towels

 

Thanks for crits mate.
I only do it in school atm. for practice
I need to fix up the "j" don't I... any suggestions?

 

ITS CATS hahaha its an extension off the A


but thanks for the crits


jester- your S looks like an 8, but sick.....i shouldn't be talkin tho cause my A looks like I A

 

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A few I just did on paper

 

lose the arrow, the star on the end of your k is.........but i'd say the bottom one is the best of the three

 

Aight, thanks man

 

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Some ish a bit after that time..

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Getting better by this time..

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NEWEST..

 

I like the third one the best, but its probs becuase simple tags are my favourite ones. anyway heres some of mine oldest to newest.

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definately feeling the last one zire, much more style

 

Its not so much the extension off the A but the halo over the extension that gives it the impression that its an I...maybe try to lose the halo and see how that looks?

 

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ye feeling the red zaron

 

werd sage, but i think the halo above the c makes is funkier....


zarone- the loop off the e with the paint im not feelin...but the last tag is sick as hell

 

Move the "t" a bit closer to the "o" and chuck in a space between the "e" and "m".
See what it looks like without the fancy stuff then add it in later.

 

Not feeling it, for me every letter just seems so seperate if you get me?

 

looks like a mess of dots squigles and letters... not to sound brutal

 

yeah you need to completely deconstructe it and get rid of all the fancy stuff.
try linking the letters together a bit,

 

infoe-you should keep keep the second one and simple down the e and loose the under line and such...

 

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