^those are really great letters with an even better flow. the only thing I would change imo would be that semicircle 3d style, you know. it doesn't look as good when there's as many crossovers as there are in this sketch. but ya I really like it.
some of mi fre hands kritisize all you wont i need typs nd advise <a href="http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=375743548&albumID=913616&imageID=12468796"><img src="http://hotlink.myspacecdn.com/images01/126/4ba2797b88e6a06067f59ab3813991a7/m.jpg" alt="" /></a> <a href="http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=375743548&albumID=913616&imageID=12468799"><img src="http://hotlink.myspacecdn.com/images01/126/b6b7bf9fb44568471c1200060901691c/m.jpg" alt="" /></a> <a href="http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=375743548&albumID=913616&imageID=12468805"><img src="http://hotlink.myspacecdn.com/images01/66/ba83b5986ca4171bfed60a6113795904/m.jpg" alt="" /></a> <a href="http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=375743548&albumID=913616&imageID=12152571"><img src="http://hotlink.myspacecdn.com/images02/8/8b1c6f141de446bd9bec73cc89229c0d/m.jpg" alt="one liner" /></a>
to kroc n wings > [Broken External Image]:http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/5973/dsc00992dk0.jpg the sagerock piece is siiiick.
resk (resk right? nor aesk) the bar on the left of the R looks off but i like it for the most part the bottom of the s needs to be a tiny bit bigger and the E seems squished the K is different and i dont dislike it ilikekicks i agree on the semicriclle crit use straight lines for those ones everyone else stop with the beef and just sketch and et better...no beef! a few of mine...pen on plate View attachment 420615 View attachment 420616 and a simp cause after those first two (which i like) you guys will say go do simps View attachment 420617 edit hahaha ignore the shitty tags i was just messin around in class
skin - its good, i dont like the extension off the bottom of the S though roz - no extensions ilikekicks - diggin the flow sage - i like all your pieces, the piece next to yours on the first one is fresh as hell though ....but agreed the sagerock piece looks clean crits por favor..... [Broken External Image]:http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan10001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0001.jpg
No_1 - looks good ilikekicks - nice maste - letter have flow white - work on your tags and make your letter straight [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2769/jamsm5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/4104/unkxm4.jpg
Everyone click my FlickR and add me ... ! Lol ... my AMK account had over 1,000 posts and my Ras account had well in excess of 1,000 posts ... so shhhhhh Mrs.Hoe ... why the heck would i lie about my post count. Lol this was my Ras account..I had posted 930 ... 2nd time highest poster ... Sume 1st... im a whore. View attachment 420702
I fail to see whats so great about this. And fix your A or R. I cant tell the difference.. (Looks like you needa work on your letters to) And that N or H looks hella ugly.
White: Make your letters the same size and it could look pretty decent. Jers: Bomb shit, I'm feeling the second one especially Tasty: some pretty unique one liners you have there. Trying to develop some style, crits would be appreciated. View attachment 420738
old shit from september [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELSimples.jpg exchange with temp [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/TEMPSimplesExchange.jpg crits please ant and no regrets - stick to simples, no regrets that first one looks horrible tasty - that one liner looks fresh and the A on the top left piece looks out of place
Calculating Infinity- Yeah theres others out there sure. But why not post a good one? I mean some of those are alright but there kinda eh. You couldve at least chosen a burner to prove your point.