That bottom OHSNAP fill is mad.Dont really like the top one. Keep going though. View attachment 421764 I think i'm venturing too far into hipster territory with this one.RAIBEE.
your straight.. you should add alot more defenition on your letters tho too hard to read.. and it looks like r royce's. hoooooly GOD i hope all of thoes are in my book? did you send yet?
something i've noticed: people add so much fluff and color and general bullshit to their work, their pieces "look" incredible, but when you get down to the letter structure, it's really just some toy shit. kinda like kurt vonnegut. hyped up fluff designed to look pretty, but at the core, is actually wack and generic. not geared towards anyone specifically, just musing off the top of my head. edit: sorry, i realize this is a crit and i didn't post a picture. bite me.
fill looks good man i've done same thing but fuck im sure 100's of other writters have to if i inspire any artist, im fucking happy View attachment 421872 View attachment 421873
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[Broken External Image]:http://[IMG]http://i37.tinypic.com/10qh2bq.jpg[/IMG] quick one cbf to finish the character
View attachment 422040 Who keeps deleting my posts ? ... iv been posting here with out a problem for the past 2 months ... what the fud ?