Bottom page bump (regardless what haze says lol) And Gube the whole thing is they are bars sure but theyre not clean. Can you look at all those bars and honestly say those are straight and clean? Sometimes its not how much you do with a piece but how clean it comes out. I see basic pieces on bridges that are clean as hell and say wow thats sick
I was typing a crit for you earlier, but then realized I pretty much said exactly what you did so tossed it....bottom of S, could be cleaner + 3d, not a fan of fill. glad you like the R more ;P But overall keep up the good work.
wings you know why u cant read any of masses things? becouse your structure is way off! and yes its true if u dont undarstand how to build letters right u cant undarstand other peoples letters and how they did them so the point is keep doing solid simples cuz the simple u showed isnt much of a brag to you you know...
spec make the p leg longer [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020616.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020617.jpg before after [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020614.jpg crits
skin - killer simple hazetheone - the 3rd pic down, nice style developing kinda look like mass's gube - simples simples simples man i had the same problem write your name like 100 times spec - nice fills and dots rays - great form, on the bottom one make the y the same size as the others and fix your 3D on your S on the right, it looks to crooked
Ok so obviously this aint that good, but I submitted it to the throw up battle just to test the water, crit please? View attachment 421947
n is weak not digging the slant theme either, but that not a throwie, its a straight [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020618.jpg fuck the y and s
hannah montan - R and A start strong then (R especially) Y and S become limp and sloppy like impotency. what gives?
idk man workin on the y and s now new peice good hella good flow old school ish post up tomorrooowwww
Don't waste your time on the "OMGLOOK!" fills right now, but concentrate on your letter structure, it needs some work.
Thanks for the crits everybody. And no nowhere near winnipeg. Dirty Jerz actually. kant- Its gettin cleaner but theyre still not right. You gotta take the width of that first bar on the left of the K and copy that to every other bar in the piece. You started fat for that bar then just got really skinny for the rest. But you are doin better so take this advice and just keep goin. Maybe try a ruler till you get better with it. Smooth- Diggin it man. Ive only seen simples so far from you so im likin the change Rays- Just as you said I dont like the Y and S. But that R especially is sick.I like those drab colors on the other piece you posted just before. Looks gloomy haha. Only part I didnt like there was the 2nd extension jumpin out of the bottom of the A Slant- Not feelin it Kaer- I like your shit and its all clean but it looks like you bit Mass a little hard on the one piece. And on the throw it looks like you bit Smooth a little too much
bump for a battle coming up [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SPETBattle.jpg crits kant - keep all of the bars the same width smooth - looks fresh except the attachment on the bottom left of your d isnt really doing it for me rays - what montana said, focus more on the letters and not the coloring, and id thicken up your letters just a bit slant - keep all of the letters the same size and make surre the bars are the same width
hot shit 7nation, middle one is my favorite. liking the new stuff smooth, only thing id change is how the E seems to like fold into itself? if that makes sense? try adding another letter and see how it looks. kant keep up with those simples. rays i always like your fills, but the Y and the S are sloppy and just seem to flail around. new outline, still working on the E. DOK