in that e you dropped all that you know about bars. you alternated the bars width where the middle part of the e forms. that just through it ALL off.
fresh shit mista monsta. that last handy is fire. the first piece is my fav, but i think the letters get progressively worse imo. would love to see you incorporate some of your sick characters into a sketch. o and the cocs made me lol. stay up man. haven't had any motivation to sketch in a long time, hopefully taking some shrooms will change that.
New Simple Runci... those are dank! I love the raw outline, its real sick. [Broken External Image]:http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/8941/img0212hx9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/img0212hx9.jpg/1/w640.png Ive been working on some simples to get posting again and this is what i liked out of the six I did... Crits?
you have the right idea, i would take out that star first of all. Your P looks halfway decent right now, but the bars on the S and the O (D?) need to be reworked. Just try different angles, lengths, curvatures, etc. maybe make more of the center bars more horizontal, rather than slightly angled (if you get what im sayin) I dunno, i think your A has the right idea too, but maybe just tweak it a tad bit. just work on making it cleaner, and keep practicing. not too keen on the color combos either. but good attempt.
beas, you have the right idea with bars and all. and your P looks halfway decent right now, but i think the S, A, and O (D?) need to be re worked a bit. I suggest making the middle bars more perfectly horizontal. and working from there. if you get what im sayin. Aside from that just try different angles, curvatures, lengths, bar ends, etc. until you get something that really looks GOOD to you. Theres a lot that can be done with the letter S so dont be afraid to get experimental. despite what people say on this forum... but i do suggest taking out that star. and im not really too keen on the color combo. maybe if you kept it all blue with the green outline. it also looks a bit rushed.
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beas, you have the right idea with bars and all. and your P looks halfway decent right now, but i think the S, A, and O (D?) need to be re worked a bit. I suggest making the middle bars more perfectly horizontal. and working from there. if you get what im sayin. Aside from that just try different angles, curvatures, lengths, bar ends, etc. until you get something that really looks GOOD to you. Theres a lot that can be done with the letter S so dont be afraid to get experimental. despite what people say on this forum... but i do suggest taking out that star. and im not really too keen on the color combo. maybe if you kept it all blue with the green outline. it also looks a bit rushed.
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bumpors! enac-the t seems out of place adre-simples man.... kans-that first green one is dooooooooooooope monster-fresh klic-your s is looking descent but the h needs work...for orange throw that is