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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    yellow haze's your name , the first one i'll smoke
    youve been doing this for 9 years and still is a joke
    now listen , youre dreaming of rappin with kylie minogue
    is that gangsta rap , or just post traumatic stress disorder
    mustve been whiped while you was young
    youre the one whos says its a robbery , without wielding a gun
    stupid fucker , go back to where you came from
    you couldnt spit for shit even you had the spit syndrome
    you bite , you suck and now everybody knows
    little punk,my rhymes are direct punches to your nose
    YOU BLOW, you dont know how your lines rhyme
    must have been pure luck , when 1 or 2 things matches on your lines
     
  2. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    listen dude, lol, that kylie monogue things was a rwemix i did on the decks of eminem and kylie lol, not me.
     
  3. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    you when i spit, it's epic, underground shit,
    and everybody knows it, dey all love it, every little bit,
    yo theres a seat why don't you sit,
    caus you is in the presence of young mastiff,
    he gonna plaster your face with cuts,
    take all your money so you live in fucking tin huts,
    i walk into the club, all bitches be stopping,
    dey be droppin, body poppin'
    you see i got this funky beat the you can't dismiss,
    now little fucka give my ak a kiss,
    they say ingorance is bliss,
    and i can justify and you know that i never lie,
    cos i just don't care,
    i have no troubles,
    now you have entered the lare,
    now get ready to take a share,
    of this beating incoming, muthafucker wheres you pubic hair?
    my ryhmes is nice,
    unlike your girl, you know the one with pubic lice,
    they call me mister systematic killer,
    cos im a graveyard filler,
    and theres nobody iller,
    born into a world at war,
    man this world is a whore for war,
    they just want it more and more,
    they bombing holes through the landscape like when i dig,
    my fist through your teeth, bitch,
    and i wont deny it, im a street fighter,
    i learned to go toe to toe, dig in a elbow,
    quick hook little knee to the jaw,
    on the streets of newcastle, where i be burnin'
    fuckin churnin' out drugs against the law,
    and as i come to the end of this freestyle rap,
    your gettin a boner,
    cos you a loner,
    at my quick little snappy lyrics,
    your a gaylord,
    your boner so hard that it cuts like a sword,
    and you see over there, theres the horde,
    a horde of fans, theres my biggest fan,
    and look it just happens to be-Dre! oh man.....
    i must be good, unleashing those lyrics like you should, makin them work like Dre could!
    what you want me for doc, you wanna sign me?
    on no you see, i only spit for a hobeee,
    so everybody here, read in awe,
    this muthafuckin freestyle just drops ya' jaw!
     
  4. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    youre 14 , you cant get into clubs
    sit the fuck down and work on your shit
     
  5. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    look at this young motherfucker talking bout boners in his raps
    calling other guys gay, and start crying cause yo boy dont wnat you back
    youre the one livin off a fake reputation
    you never been gangsta , you never stood alcohol when you drank some
    when youd smoke weed , youd turn green and act wierd
    when you round men , jump around and act queer
    never lost your virginity ,still you told me you did
    you cant fight against a man like me - come back when you grown ,kid
     
  6. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    got you trippin , ill chase you around like pac man
    off the dome , i get shit to bounce like a new 2pac jam
    im ghetto , cruisin through your rich ass hood with a datsun
    even affter 9 years of rappin , you couldnt sound fresher than that man
    i nick your shit , snatch your bitches purse and run away with it
    sue me ,ill pay the jury an leave with all your jewelry and shit
    14 years old actin like you 20 , kids gotta get your shit straigt
    i fuck the badest bitches, the ones you wish were your soul mate
    dont rap like you ogt clout , dont rap like you got ak's it aint real
    i get it with chicks , your girl's ass a magnet - i got the dick of steel
    your dad's a jake - dont fuck with that illegal shit
    its my game , its my world - a slap across the face is all you'll get
    i aint unconscious , i aint small time or tamp
    im dablunthead , toy eater motherfuckin champ

    can i take her home??
     
    Last edited: Nov 21, 2008
  7. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    :confused:
     
  8. Thread-Locks

    Thread-Locks Senior Member

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    Small time crook gets my big ups
    He plays with the hounds doesn't mess with the pups
    Meaning he'll rip you, and I'll tear you in half
    Smelling your flesh, in other words feeling our wrath
    YO yellow haze this is where I call you out
    For knowing what being a punkass bitch is all about
    Your internet raps are disgusting,
    I didn't even listen to your mix tape cause I know that it needs dusting
    And refurnishing, retooling and scrap it all anyway
    You're as full of yourself as UNCONSCIOUS is gay
    Look at his signature, I can't help but point out once more
    He quoted himself, he's a rap lyric whore

    Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck i'm high and on the way home I walked into a tree and a stick poked me right in the eye and I haven't been able to see for hours haha
     
  9. H1TBYNUMB3RS

    H1TBYNUMB3RS Senior Member

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    High school teachers the false preachers of improper, philosiphy,
    thoes fools are stopin me
    from spitting catostraphy,
    worship yourfake phrophecy.this shits a life lesson,
    these changes fool you like your lifes stressed-an,
    theres no way out the bitch rats snout,
    politicians i tend to doubt,
    this endless gaping drought.. Of, society, feeling great anxiety,
    we need variety, sostop tryin me.
     
  10. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    yo, being 14 doesn't stop me from getting beer, i look old enough, and it's illegal to smoke weed at any age, so i can smoke my shit however the fuck i want.
     
  11. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    God damn it..

    What the fuck is this world comin' to, they cut my gas off in winter
    So how the fuck am I supposed to drink this coffee, supposed to cook dinner?
    Explain to me why the people with money don't give two shits
    about the folks at the bottom, they act like we useless
    modern day Che Guevara mindset instilled within me
    im startin' a revolution today and it's just the beginning
    if you with me, grab the biggest gun you can find
    go outside and shoot the first fuckin' business man in sight
    let him leak out all of the life essence
    the brutality at first may seem a little senseless
    but soon the ones at top will hear this message
    and its an important one death is how we stress it
    Bless the kids that's like me birthed addicted to yay
    if God has a plan for all of us why do some see brighter days?
    we ain't chose to be unlucky, we was born into this evironment
    so that's why we get so many fuckin' urban nihilists
    gangs runnin' rampant, they call their cause a movement
    but what they movin' and exactly the truth, it's misconstruin'
     
  12. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    i laugh...
    fuck complicated flows, simples will still kill ya ass
    so thread locks, please pull ya head out ya ass
    understand i am dope and you are just cashed
    so i resin hit u in the lips for the bread u stash
    but u dont hold no dough like the bricks we pack
    we gets the cash and live the life
    your hater swag just fuels my light like a million kikes
    u burn
    you learn, u step to me u turn to ash
    slash and gash ya throat
    watch ya choke on ya own blood locc
    its nothin to me, you see, you simply are a whack emcee
    and me? im a veteran, better than he
    better wit m.i.c's
    deliverin shivers down the spines of sayers of rhymes
    whose lines lack the steez
    please believe ur breathin cease quick when unconscious grips the mic and spits a sick breeze
    cold wind
    cant fuck with what im holdin
    royal flush, ya swagger foldin
    im moldin in the green
    my team collect chedder, its a daily routine
    yadida mean jelly bean?
    u soft.
    you a fruity mother fucker like david hasselhoff
    get off my tip u bitch
    im sick of slut emcees tryin to fuck with a ***** but cant handle the n.u.t's
    i beats guts and skeets nuts all over ya style
    cant fuck with the rivers i flow like niles
    for miles and miles
    accross the game, lames pile
    names crossed off the hitlist each time i spit this
    energy pumpin like pistons
    double pistols never missin
    call the minister, im in my prime so call me WINSTON
    leave u below the earth, under the HILL, behind the CHURCH,
    since birth
    been spittin them sentences worse
    murkin punks and chumps that try n test my funk
    but they cant touch my high and they cant see my lumps
    they blind to bills larger than franks, they flunk
    they game is bunk
    they like the uss arizona, they ship is sunk
    for months they come with junk belonging in dumps
    tryin to say they paid, got the swag,
    but wouldnt get humped by two depressed fat chicks drowzy and drunk
     
  13. Thread-Locks

    Thread-Locks Senior Member

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    unconscious that line was so bad i'm sig'n it
     
  14. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    look old enough for what? barbies?
    kid you need to shut the fuck up and look at yourself in the mirror
     
  15. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    all off you eat bum cracks
     
  16. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    wait.. the cream filled kind or the honey glaze kind?
     
  17. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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  18. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    Yeah, and i look fine...
     
  19. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    hoppin out blazed of the escalade im payed/
    i head for the trap come bak with the jane/
    run rat cuz these gats known to act so untame/
    i snatch up ya dame on my way to get laid/
    try to get paid anyway i know how/
    so u wanna get dahn? i eject the whole round/
    dont clown with my herbs i smoke the whole pound/
    blow round every corner i hold the snow mounds/
    thas the way it goes dahn, at least where i been raised at/
    and if i spray gats ya brain where ya J's at/
    my money stay stacked yall prolly wanna taste that/
    try and take that, be ready for the payback..........
     
  20. Tampering With Evidence

    Tampering With Evidence Senior Member

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    All of this beef and hate and so much controversy
    When Tamp clicks or spits I ain't showin no mercy
    I'll put every fake fuck emcee here on blast at once
    I do this when I'm bored I don't practice it for months
    I don't buy into all your false fronts and fake stunts
    So what you drink a forty so what you smoke blunts
    I'm quite humble, modest, not really one to boast
    But it's time I gave this whole fuckin' thread a roast
    Burn it like toast, I'm not restricted I'm coast to coast
    The host with the most, fluidly and fluently freestylin'
    Pissin' you people off til' these disses all start pilin'
    Get crazy and start wildin', stop, look, and just listen
    To the words I'm spittin, listen I'm not trippin' or flippin'
    On this 40 I'm not sippin' and on this joint I'm not hittin'
    I'm zonin' I'm not in a concentrated type of mind state
    Relate, stop ya bullshit debate, yeah of course I hate
    But when I do it's only necessary so this thread I carry
    On my back, in fact, I react and act like a visionary

    Rambling..for the most part, but honestly, Yellow Haze and DaBluntHead
    drop it, no one gives a fuck, and no one here has authority over
    another, so whatever you say is kind of pointless.

    Big ups to the kids in here droppin decent shit.