thanks big blue... im tryin to work on it.. hows this... yeahh the E looks alot like a B actually...sigh.
Book Hey Crits please. its been along time and ive been thinking about getting back into it, Chose the name book, cause im a bookworm. Next is a Throwie. Help is widely accepted.
[Broken External Image]:http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6106/tagsmuv7.jpg Haven't actually started spraying yet, keeping it in the book for now. Any (constructive) criticism would be appreciated. I apologize for the shitty cell pic. The caption on the sticker says "Lectori Salutem", or "Greetings Reader" in latin.
Audious, you have to down-size it if you want anyone to be able to see it. and about crits- you have to give them to get them.
That better? Sorry, I have a 24" monitor and just kind of forget sometimes As far as giving criticism, I just started writing that stuff like... 5 days ago, lol. I'm in no position to be giving criticism.
Even though you are only new, you can still see something that looks not so good, and if people thing you are wrong, then they can go fuck themselves. The drawings look good, but start off making them more simple. Letter progression is your friend. Anyway, welcome to BS.
Same: I guess the drip is a personal preference but, I'm not big on it. The second one, the letter form is pretty wack. The way the letters are overlapped and distorted, they can be misinterpreted. ober: [Broken External Image]:http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5803/oberhandqd2.png
audio- wrong thread post that shit in toy blackbooks same- first handys good loose the clouds and the drips ober- close the bottom of your o red meanstreak and shitty cellphone camera pics that I kept getting in my fingers in:
dude i like ur letters nice style juss try to make em a lil thicker and try a few diff filler styles yee digg
Mez, work less on making letters that look like graffiti, and work more on making letters that flow together. Ober, I don't really dig it. It flows, but you warp some of you letters to get it to flow. Try and keep the letters proportionate.
What the hell are you talking about? That piece has neither flow nor structure. This is a tag thread and there isn't even a tag in the picture, let alone a hand style! The kid needs to start back from the basics.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6GUIKxXX0o a quick vid with a pentel white http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VEgcW1cLvik and with a black kiwi mop (fucked up my "E").
I think you should lose all of your kinks at shit at the end of your letters. Use a seperate stroke for the line in your A. The quotations and O dot are unnecessary in my opinion, also.