i'm not sure... like I'm pretty new around here but your sketches are neither bombs nor pieces. maybe you should post those in the tots blackbooks thread. *i like some of the letters for sure, way to much going on tho, simplify. try to write one name... no extras, tags, crews, or characters... just for now, just for practice.
Why do they have graff creators? They are all terrible, every single one of the graff creators are probably the worst thing to base a piece off of. I just don't get it.
SIZE- this thread is for painted stuff only, but I'll ignore that. It looks pretty cool actually, if you could paint that nice and clean I wouldn't mind seeing that on a wall. Fix the top tab thing on the S, as in ditch the overlap part. And the middle tooth on the E is fucked up, make it straight. Nice work.
Thanks man i agree with everything you said i appreciate the crits..i will make the S more flat on the top and get rid of the overlap on the I ..
work on your straight letters and do basic simple stuff, remember if your doing a word and not a character the main focus should be on the word and its structure so if it looks gross on paper just as an outline then on a wall with color and add ons it will just look worse. not meant as a diss but I figured you would want a lil more than the typical SIMPLES most people would say. heres one piece I did on the weekend, final outline is total shit cause my skinny got clogged and my hands were so frozen It took me 20 min to warm them up enough to move them View attachment 427357 heres the BB version View attachment 427358
grimetime- looks good mehn only thing i could say is that the white highlights on the crab peice look funny to me cuz they a solid line then a faded line over top juss looks kinda funny quick q i know normal paint doesnt go over chrome paint cuz of the different chemicals or some shyt like that but when u use silver montana, can u use juss regualr montana black overtop, or do u need a special kind?
Grimetime=HECTIC. I love the chaos of it all. I will never run out of things to look at on those sheets of paper.