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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. Tampering With Evidence

    Tampering With Evidence Senior Member

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    please stop rappin'....honestly, give up.
     
  2. SBOMBS

    SBOMBS Elite Member

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    i smash mass booty like mang every hour
    i slap so hard they crumble like the twin tours
    my hoochie named bitch calls me mr Laden
    cuz i wont let her walk without a fuckin turban
    this man haz many hoes many holes
    i rule with a hand of steel wich i fist in their bunghole
    steel my hoe and ima show u a world of pain
    i rock the ak like the mofo max payne
    bomb this mike like my buday taliban
    livin for tomorrow is my number one plan
     
  3. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    yellow haze ima agree with evidence
    look at you, aint even worth 6 cents
    murder you live,
    what a 10 years badly spent
    i outspit you 100 percent
    no chance in this battle
    like a fist against cement
     
  4. framin-It

    framin-It Senior Member

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    A colabo with small time and myself....small time first then me.

    A deadly force comes swoopin' down on Yellow Haze/
    Be afraid, no gods gonna help no matter how much your pray/
    Run away, if you can, think your faster then my projectiles?/
    Wreck the child, make him respect this style/
    I feel kinda bad cutting him down for acting stupidly/
    Dissin' a kid who's not even gone through puberty/
    I've had hairs on my sac attack more violently then this youngin/
    Talkin' how he's in the club and he's ultra thuggin/
    Homie needs to sit down and shut up, these is grown folks talkin/
    Spit bullets leave you riddled, spine injured, you crippled, no longer walkin/
    And it could have all been prevented if you had known your place and stayed/
    Oh, yeah, and the world doesn't accept you.. Because you're gay/

    Speeking of your homosexuality, that fact is you cant battle me
    me and small time are fedup with this shit, cant you see?
    its a known fact that you cant compeat, you aint no king and you got no crown
    you keep commin at us, like the alchemist beat, we'll hold you down
    everything you say is from your old rhymes, if you can all them that
    your shit just dont make seince G, like a white kid from the burbs packin a gat
    im done with this beef you have with this all of us on this thread
    you still call momy over when you need help to butter your beread?
    your nothing but a silly kid with writtin down shitty lyrics
    get the fuck out of here man, we simply dont want to hear it
    so come back if you want to be embarassed some more
    we will rip you apart again, and leave you mentaly sore.


    nice shit small time, we'll do a better one with tamp too.
     
    Last edited: Nov 26, 2008
  5. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    I feel kinda bad cutting him down for acting stupidly/
    Dissin' a kid who's not even gone through puberty/

    LOL
     
  6. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    can i fuckin get some? know what im saying?

    You better stang a new life, yellow haze turned red,
    whoop your ass in your nightmares, have you wettin' yo bed
    im addicted to pussy , money and weed
    smoke a fat blunt , b-l-u-n-t
    i keep my shit on the DL, your bullshit, got to stop now,
    you writin' this shit meanwhile, your girl is out there, gettin' down
    kid , it looks like youve had too much attention
    i put the tension wrench in,
    picklock the doors to hip hop, with my pen shit
    all that rapping thing was really a bad attempt and
    your name doesnt even deserve to be mentionned
    if youd like we could hang , i mean literallly
    i'd tie the knot-you twitchin, gaggin' in agony,
    i'm keeping my whole soldiers family in back of me,
    and they all dressed in black, cause see,
    they know what's gon happen,
    and in case you are not listening
    its yellow haze's funeral
    i spit bomb shit like nitroglycerin


    say my motherfuckin name
     
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  7. framin-It

    framin-It Senior Member

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    fucking nice shit my friend, props.
     
  8. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    DaBluntHead, that was pretty tight man!

    time for Small Time Floetry Corner.

    freestyle haiku,
    made especially for Haze,
    i hate you so much.

    feel free to e-snap your e-fingers.
     
  9. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    I rhyme with haikus, in tight crews...A modern day mozart who might lose, these fights dudes! im tight too! i swear im the best, put a tear in your chest, dive in ya hive..im that bear in a nest, embarrased? well yes! i hardly make sense, my hearts taken dents while starting to vent, in jail while im camping...my bars are intense! (intense), i spar with cement, but cant seem to win, while dancing with sin...the cheapest of drunk drinks the fanciest gin!

    ummm....ye?
     
  10. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    haha, that was fire Tricks.

    NOW EVERYBODY ON PAGE THREE-ONE-THREE
    PUTCHA MOTHAFUCKIN' HANDS UP AND FOLLOW ME
    NOW EVERYBODY ON PAGE THREE-ONE-THREE
    PUTCHA MOTHAFUCKIN' HANDS UP
     
  11. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    hahahaha how dyou come up with that
     
  12. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    Shit that was good...

    but ya'll know Sketch Three i trounce,
    my rhymes way a ton, his an ounce,
    muthafucka im ready to pounce,
    his beats got no bounce,
    it seems here that i don't belong,
    so i gonna make me belong in this song,
    it seems, everything i do goes wrong,
    so i correct it right hear with this unstoppable song,

    if me and you were to brawl,
    it would be a mall, blood all over, you fall,
    i havn't even used my full capability,
    so go to bed at night, and say a little prayer,
    that i don't find you and layer,
    you with bullets, and some melee,
    shit i cut open your bellie,

    if were to go toe to toe,
    i would beat you blow for blow,
    my skillz for show,
    muthafucka stop being a hoe,

    i will never be as good as you,
    but at least i stay true,
    I support FRAMIN-IT in anything he does,
    and though we share no love
    My brother from another mother sent from the above
    A thug ***** just like me,
    one of the best -- might be

    you, stopr giving me stick,
    muthafucka you got no dick,
    you wanna give my AK a lick?
    i punch and punch you till you get sick,
    you best be quick,
    i give you a kick,
    extra slick,
    you don't wanna mess with me,
    you get on my wick,

    I'ma break it down to the nitty-gritty one time
    When it comes to the lyrics I gets busy with mine
    Busy as a beaver, ya best believe-a
    This grand king runnin shit with the speed of a cheetah,
    meet a
    lyrical murderer...
    I'm servin em like two scoops of chocolate
    Check it how I rock it

    So put your money on the bread winner
    I kick lyrics so dope that the brothers call em head spinners
    I got the tongue that is outdone anyone
    from the rising to the setting of the sun
    or the moon, I consume the room with doom
    When I hear the kick of a 808 bass ... POOM
     
  13. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    come on, try and battle me,
    i understand limited is all you can be,
    can't you see, i am like a flying object,
    weaving lyrical cobwebs,
    i am last of a breed,
    i smoke unlimited weed,
    no matter your creed,
    these words you should heed,
    i is ill,
    you over the hill,
    sittin on the window sill,
    while i am the one rapping with such skill,
    one song is enough to give you your fill,
    i give your ears orgasmes,
    while you cause me to have back spasme's
    you cheap like spam,
    listen to this jam,
    i take it and i ram,
    it down your through,
    help operate like automita cam,
    very rarely make a rhyme bad,
    cos i is one amazing lad,
    and you are sad,
    you look at me and see i am clad,
    with skills,
    you know i feels harsh, killin' yall for actin stupidly,
    to some guys who havn't been through lyrical puberty,
    i take away americas liberty,
    make a brand new slave trade,
    blow up the world trade,
    that is the extent of my power,
    now go away and take a shower,
    wash off this lyrical beating,
    that you are eating,
    haha muthafucka top that....
     
  14. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    You gonna pay me royalties for that crunchy nugget you just bit?
     
  15. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    No, but i must say that your a genious and thank you for letting me use your skills against you...was the rap OK?
     
  16. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    no.





    dick riding doesnt give you the right to bite
     
  17. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    big pun and fat joe - twinz

    listen little bitch , first of all listen to instrumentals when you freestyle not tracks with raps
    second stop biting you silly motherfucka
     
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  18. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    or fucks sake freak, take a joke, i know, and have admitted to have been beaten the fuck up lyricaly, so why you still bother? i am just doing this to get feedback....

    Listen, i am good enough for me,
    thats all i want to be,
    you C-U-N-T,
    i'll rap till i die,
    and i wont lie,
    i bit 2 lines in my freestyle- why?
    cos i gettin beat the fuck up ******,

    anyway, i am no worse than you,
    so what you gonna do?
    get better,
    read this letter by letter,
    you B-A-D,
    your shit makes me sad
     
  19. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    you stilll bite it :)
    oh btw , dont use the N-word
    you really should base yourself on the quality not quantity
    you should NEVER BITE , not even if you get your ass handed to yourself
    its like punching a man in the balls
     
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  20. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    yo i was going thru a mellow phase,
    but fuck it cats stay amazed,
    when i fricasse,
    yellow haze,
    and his fellow gays,
    here the death march when gods chello plays,