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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    tightest shit i've seen on here in a minute.
    "in jail while im camping...my bars are intense"

    that line is amazing.


    i'm taking the game over, cause i've always been greedy
    my parents spoiled me, wasn't ready when they released me
    i stick out like 3d, but most people can't see me
    it's like the untrained eye trying to read graffiti
    and you mc's can't beat me, i speak through mp3's
    never freestyle cause my style ain't free
    so when you battle rappers wanna holla at me
    i make tracks, like a junkie, let me roll up my sleeves
    i spank beats. i got rap bent over my knee
    and i'm yellin who's ya daddy, but he older than me


    blah...
     
  2. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    (not directed at anyone)

    Take a deep breath, listen to your heart stop thumpin
    I'll spit your death, feel your blood stop pumpin
    Lyrical daggars murder little loser taggers
    Poetic blades disembowel bitch braggers
    Steal your girl and put on the swagger, My dicks so large I gag her.
    Hearin "Finish Him" as this verse ends and I leave you to stagger.

    Give it up, your pitiful life is through
    Slain by Vagrant in his Freestyle Rapping debut
    You're just a little punk who thinks he's coo'
    But you watch Winnie the Pooh and listen to Blink-182

    I would rhyme some more but I bid you adeiu (haha)
     
  3. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    listen yellow haze,
    if i make you cry , or if I break your heart
    could you forgive me? Im just doing whats best for everybody
    punk ass bitch

    your new kid- this is BS the internet prison
    you got burned and its time to scrape you like resin
    its in our power to bomb shit like the 2 towers
    you should know not to drop lines when you in the showers
    rich kid from the english burbs
    step the fuck back from me cause you gon get served
    i dont want you to get hurt , but you will and you know it
    my style made more victims than africa conflictss
    talk about you pack guns when you cant even lift one
    i train on the daily , if you wanna fight come get some
    i got a chronic problem , getting high since im 12
    you 14 and you didnt go through shit and ive been through hell
    stop talking like your hard , stop saying you getting knocked the fuck out
    if you wanna be real stop trying and follow my route

    little kid needs to learn to walk before running
     
  4. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    A colab done on another site:

    Rap is my nationality,
    my punches send you to insanity,
    they wheel you in, strapped to a table,
    mentally unstable,
    after the beating i gave you, unable,
    to walk, your reduced to a jabbering mess,
    expect nothing less,
    when you *bleep* with a gangstet made of pure lyrics,
    my evil, will send you to hysterics,
    i stand out, from all the generics,
    i attract attention,
    i give you a thorough comprhension,
    a detention, for trying to get the club up, create fun,
    my shit got the force of a gun,
    shot straight from the lung,
    so run bitch run,
    and don't stop, til ya reach the sun,
    i about to lay off my homie,
    come on homie showme,

    This is a rap battle and you’re skills are being put on test
    Slaughter you with rabid jabs that decimate your chest
    Take ya best jab, and spin it back until you get concussion
    This aint a rap battle, its spontaneous lyrical combustion
    Fvck lyrical discussion, I’m here to bust ya rib cage
    With a lyrical twelve gauge, formed from pure rage
    You’re on stage, and your bars just fail to deliver
    I spit potent venom, that’ll rot your fvcking liver
     
  5. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    Fucker, yo think i'm rich? you obviously don't read my lyrics, i am barely eatin, struggling to feed me and my mother, i am 14, but i don't go to school, i have to work with my dad to earn enough money to buy shit from netto, so before you go calling me rich, just fucking listen, instead off pissin your fuckin shit lyrics, little shit rhymes, fucker, you like dog shit, your there everytime i spit....
     
  6. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    watching this mutherfucker, i hate him,
    i swear, for dinner once i ate him,
    he can't read, thicko,
    ill make his fucking eyes bleed,
    knock his head off with speed and haste,
    turn your fuckin head into paste,
    theres not a punch that i would waste,
    he should think before he opens, his big cocksucker,
    he truly is a fucker,
    i would stamp on his brain, and make you feel the pain,
    of coming under a rain, of fucked up knives,
    i have been stabbed 5 times, and you talk about hell?
    what about the fact that i been hit with a shell?
    so when you talk about hell,
    know that theres other people with bad lives as well,
    you talk about walk before i go running,
    well you are still crawling,
    fucker wait till we get brawlin,
    i shoot you in the face 5 times,
    it'll make an improvement on your looks,
    wouldn't have to listen to your fucked up rhymes
     
  7. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    aight, ok. lemme get in n drop my 2 cents
    all yall kids talkin bout violence is justa nuicanse
    lets face it half your whole rap is useless
    and the other half is truethless
    theres no need to get internet ruthless
    n leave somebody lyricaly toothless
    but ima bouta, slap you around need some hand powda
    you dont wanna start it with me.
    my lyrics go beyond mathmatical back to practical
    and then a lil further and get down right tactical
    So sophisticated my minds macbook compatible
    yours is just uninhabitable
    N now you trippin over your own words as your read what iv just written
    Its these skills that leave all the girlies smitten and there homeboys wishin
    they could be dishin the kinda shit given i do
    cause im a king of this freestyle shit
    your just a peseant ora peon,
    i been around awhile dog ima warrior
    might as well call me Cleon.
    Cause i be destroyin destroyers actin colder than freon
    the only way you gunna see any colder is if you go to antarctica to get yo ski on!

    HAH ha Happy thanksgiving peeps
    lemme know whatcha think
     
  8. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    oh and this line:

    you should know not to drop lines when you in the showers

    is awesome . lol

    and yellow:
    you like dog shit, your there everytime i spit....

    this basically says you spit dog shit... so either you be eatin it, or your dissin your own rhymes... idk neither one is very good for you ha
     
  9. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    tight rhyme but the flow needs to be improved
     
  10. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    the flow seems fine to me.
     
  11. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    my city u lucky 2 see anoher sun set,
    kids with guns step,
    youts diein over dumb bets,
    seen as just anoter young threat,
    finish school cuss lifes just one test,
    fail an ur a dead beat,
    u dread sleep,
    nightmares in ur heads deep,
    spent all ur bread weeks,
    ago,over some stupid hoe,
    never flirt with kids tho,
    only step to cuties with cupids flow
    u stuck macking booty on skid row,
     
  12. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    clever fucking bastard, i meant in the way that wherever i go, dogshit is there...uuugh



    This is a rap battle and you’re skills are being put on test
    Slaughter you with rabid jabs that decimate your chest
    Take ya best jab, and spin it back until you get concussion
    This aint a rap battle, its spontaneous lyrical combustion
    Fvck lyrical discussion, I’m here to bust ya rib cage
    With a lyrical twelve gauge, formed from pure rage
    You’re on stage, and your bars just fail to deliver
    I spit potent venom, that’ll rot your fvcking liver


    it seems that whenever i do a good rhyme, ya'll ignore, so READ this one....
     
  13. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    my words dont just desimate ur chest,
    spittin hooks that scarpe ur flesh,
    punch line that'le take your breath,
    never swith spontainius,
    always ready wen im bustin,
    heat seekin metaphors,
    fuck combustion,
    set a claw,
    to ur guts an,
    watch em wet the floor,
    no use cussin,
    thats wat i got lyrics buckin like a beretta for,
    my lungs are gail force,
    freestyle whilee out runin a male horse,
    combat diceaplin fuck ur frail chores,
     
  14. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    i spit so hot, it evaporate the saliva in my mouth
    so when i ask you for a drink, please, help a brother out
     
  15. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    ill help a brother out.....the club,
    barstool fill your mout with blood,
     
  16. Tampering With Evidence

    Tampering With Evidence Senior Member

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  17. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    never that fam, sure i got my old acount banned but u cnt get rid of me
    allways come back like herpes
     
  18. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    Haha so now you catch feelings???
     
  19. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    shit you say it,
    how can I believe what you say if you bite half of your verses??
    You know im just trying to make you mad?? I dont really give a shit about your life and all that stuff that you so-call interesting going on.
     
  20. framin-It

    framin-It Senior Member

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    your right, if we belived the shit he said in his "rhymes" we would think he was a god and all that shit...stop bitching yellow haze.