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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    Im full of turkey on this thanksgiving night
    Mashed potatos, stuffing, and gravy it was outta sight
    I ate that shit and all the fixins with all my might
    These holiday lyrics are fly, its time to catch my flight

    Ya'll fight and fight, but whatcha think of these rhymes?
    I think they're alright

    ha
     
  2. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    tired of living, sick of not dieing
    so many attempts im called the suicide tyrant
    so many overdoses now im the hoapitals number one client
    they just hold me my room, i pay rent while they supply it

    fuck this rappin shit
     
  3. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    well, i suck

    hi kids! me and Gesus will show you what suicide is
    bombs around our waists, the everyday nihilists!
    but if we're goin' down a couple thou are comin' with us
    inside the church, this'll be the first order of business
    malign minds, well, i can't find mine, that's why i'm eatin others brains
    its gooey and chewy, but's i think thats okay, i kinda like the taste


    what's that smell...?
    me shitting myself.
     
  4. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    i crawl lacs with tall stacks so hoes on the ball sack
    draw back a small mac and brains on a laws back
    fall back young solider or you can get ya jaw clapped
    saw that paper and jumped up on all cash
    the flow dont stop when it come to the bops
    slugs pop on the block wen we rollin on shocks
    cops like the rocks, cuz they on the watch
    got a flock of snow rocks in the sock
    hop on the scene with codeine and tinted screens
    starched dahn jeans lookin so crispy clean
    roll with a team of sick twisted G's
    sip on lean, split wigs and leave
    no remourse dahn this course for real
    wanna bumb guns well i hope ya grip sum steel
    candy spill in the ville where i make mills
    take bills and stay trill offa my pay reel..............nyukka!
     
  5. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    just depends on where you put the emphasis, but maybe youde like it better if it were just and "then get down right tactical" instead of the go a lil further part... idk i just didnt wanna edit my shit.
     
  6. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    Yeah, well why would i lie about being poor, and barely having a house?

    Listen, i am not a writer, like eazy-e, but i am a good rapper, my flow is solid

    so shut the fuck up, you still havn't commented on my rap
     
  7. DaBluntHead

    DaBluntHead Banned

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    its obviously not yours , nothing original AND we all heard that kind of shit before
     
  8. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    aw it seems yellow needs a talking to.

    I karate kick kangaroos, with slang I bruise, time to mangle crews to cries of "dang I lose!", I'll hang with you...but only till you drop dead, cuz i need my neck to support my fuckin hot head! I've shot lead, at kids who start to wine, leavin Yellow feelin dead cuz he left his heart online, my bars are fine, I dont need you to correct me, i'll leave Yellow gone like the Coldplay case was empty!...kid im hefty, weighin 700 lbs, cuz the bodies that i carry cant drag along the ground! i bang with soind, I think i struck a tragic blow, cuz you couldnt "see Tricks" at a fuckin magic show....
     
  9. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    Yo
    I am cool fa sho
    oh
    woah
    yeah.
     
  10. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    Fuck this thread,
    i leave you all on the floor half dead,
    then run over your arms till my tyres go red,
    then cover you with petrol, set you alight,
    burn you down to ashes,
    flashes of the purest red,
    i put you in a coma,
    and i put 66 in your dome-a...fuck it...
     
  11. brainlord

    brainlord Senior Member

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    it aint much of a surprise that everyone is a murder rap
    picture that i couldn't expect any other kind of sentence wrap
    because my text sat down struggling over broken hearts
    struggling to start like my ride but its missing car parts
    pulling apart each word frame by frame
    maybe its only hard because i forgot how to play the game
    covered with a shroud of shame that keeps my world dark
    set that spark of light thatll burn my skin like tree bark
    make my mark to gain my place scrawled on your face
    make my presence permanent without a petty erase
    at most my ink might smear last until the end of the year
     
  12. Tampering With Evidence

    Tampering With Evidence Senior Member

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    On the outside stand strong like shit don't faze me
    Maybe, because it's eatin' me up on the inside daily
    Crazy I just keep findin myself in the same damn boat
    Lost a float, message in a bottle, murder he wrote
    Soaked, I keep feelin' like I'm losin' all of my friends
    This shit keeps happening that no one ever intends
    Or comprehends, people gettin' worked up and upset
    Still not up yet, apparently I still haven't had enough yet
    Shit goes great for a while then it all falls to pieces
    I have a thesis, trends up and down more than Nasdaq
    How whack, feelin' like we're havin more fights than fun
    I just wanna be done, shit really might not have begun
    My boys got my back, nope only one of em thats a fact
    My girls got my back, nope none of em now, thats whack
    I can't relax, lately I'm on edge, just waitin to burst
    When worst comes to worst, apparently it's you first
    I feel like shit, I can't sleep, I'm hungry but I can't eat
    I thought we could, apparently we just can't compete
    Dot Dot delete, retreat, I'll be damned if I do repeat
    I forget now how it was we all even came to meet
    We've had good times, and we've had a few fights
    But never would I trade it back for all of the nights
    That I spent with you, you, her, him and the crew
    Parkin' lot pimpin', partyin', kickin it, or whatever we do
    We did, what do they say if it's too good to be true
    It probably is, but fuck we just tryna have fun like kids
    Well, we're growin' up, next year we'll probably all be gone
    Thinkin back reminiscing on how this shit all went wrong
    Sing a song, dance, drink, smoke some tree, whatever
    Rock bottom, shit can only get better, I'll miss forever
    Thinkin' I'm just sayin' all this shit just to be sayin' it?
    Nah, theres a message here man, and I'm conveyin' it
    So I'm telling you this all right now for your own benefit
    Read this slow, at least take away a good 95 percent of it
    There's a lotta shit goin' on right now, no ones gonna know
    Woah, I tried, so now I'm a sit back and watch the show
    Take it like a man, take one for the team like my homie
    Apparently you didn't know me, as well as I thought
    If you can't have it, it's always somethin' you want
    True talk, so if I upset you then yeah I do apologize
    But realize, those real eyes, see through those real lies.
     
  13. G-Fat

    G-Fat Elite Member

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    droppin lyrical bombs like a hiphop zombie saddam
    bring the heat, bring the funk no matter what
    all your bitches are leavign covered in my spunk
    BUMP,BUMP,BUMP the bass in my trunk
    cruisin' puffin a dutch, when ni66az ask "what's up?"
    i say not much.

    shiiieeetttttt
    *b-boy stance*
    *gesus pout face*
    lullz
     
  14. brainlord

    brainlord Senior Member

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    second to last but still next to none
    part of my past but still part of anyone
    i come from the lab really haven't seen much daylight
    apart from my scabs its still proof im able to fight
    im alright at least most of the time i still can stand
    really its a constant battle to rhyme but i understand
    cause hard work and effort are the greatest pleasure of all
    from the blood on my shirt ill still refuse to go to the hospital
    first to fall just learn to get up not crying over scraped knees
    over time ive received my cup but still havent filled my needs

    eh just experimenting what do you guys think?
     
  15. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    Hey, my rhymes is glorious,
    offensive and notorious,
    i beat you pound for pound,
    now watch me fire off this round,
    as i unleash this fantastic sound,
    and now theres another MC for me to drownd,
    my style mathematical,
    and mechanical,
    gets downright tactical,
    oh so practical,
    my mind is macbook compatible,
    i take you and i amputate,
    then i'll start and mutilate,
    and dice, can't concentrate,
    sellin my glocks,
    admit i really rocks,
    o get your head flown 100 blocks,
    no more jokes on sucking cocks,
    my rhymes not complex,
    butcha know dey wrecks,
    lyk ma ears afta u on the dex,
    you know i is the rap chief,
    stop bein' a fool or lose teeth,
    rollin' on sick rims,
    big car punish you for sins,


    ....What do we think gentlemen?....
     
  16. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    BRAINLORD- quite solid, has a decent pattern, thogh you may (MAY) want to edit the daylight part as it is so long, and the next line so short, it is hard to spit to, just a friendly tip...you may need to use some word play for the hospital and all bits....
     
  17. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    Herbn posted first.

    I THINK YOU'RE A LITTLE SHIT BITER.
    GTFO!!!!!

    Your shit is wack

     
  18. anti-anti-crime

    anti-anti-crime Elite Member

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    i dont freestyle, but i do know that anybody who bites should get a hammer to the knee. the sledge kind.
    so like anybody who has a shitty job, no girlfriend, no money, and no friends, feel free to go ahead and go bungy jumping without the chord.
     
  19. not_hammer_time

    not_hammer_time Banned

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    is it really a freestyle if you have all the time in the world to think it out, type it up, look it over, and make adjustments as needed?
     
  20. Yellow Haze

    Yellow Haze Senior Member

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    People don't get jokes here do they? I bite, and in one of my songs i wrote:

    "i don't bite the hand that feeds me, i tear it off from the elbow...."

    And then i dropped that li9ne to see if you went

    "oooh clever" but nobody did, which dissapoints me....

    I know i'm gettin older as i look over my shoulder,
    my lyrics gettin bigger and dey gettin bolder,
    like music full of reble, and bass 'n' treble,
    time to fucking take it to the next level!