Seror - practice more. you may be on to somethin Sketched - that orange side is nice an the backwards one would probably be even better with color but the shake isnt that good imo. keep it up tho Resp - thats kinda funky lookin. i wana see the finished product crits?? ive sharpened this style up lately so i may post soon with an S with the rest of the family. i couldnt on this cuz i drew it way to big
leak- your bars are off. all of them. umm that isnt really a style either, its just really basic letter structure/
LEAK - yea ur bars are not even sketched- those are all fresh man i like the first one the best subconcious- thats pretty cool, but yea u should try it on blank paper after a while like who ever else already said darkiest- really not much too it, try somethin new every once and a while new style attpempt changed from sade to zade
well i didnt mean an actual style i jus meant this style of letters. simples. an what do you mean my bars are off? what am i suppose to do take a ruler an measure every bar? ive seen plenty pieces with uneven bars. this is my first time doin simples so my bars arent guna be even
Leaks; I just mean that some of the bars don't line up (like the hole in the A). It's still good for a first attempt. Zade; the A is kinda illegible and the D looks a bit more like an A than a D. Try and make it more simpe.
leak- bars just need a bit of tweaking. keep em flowing strait and try to fix the gap between your L and E. L's are a bitch to make flow from what i know.. but keep workin on them simps.. lookin good. Zade- the letters are a bit illedgible.. just go a bit simpler and define youre letters a bit more. Monster- keep workin with what youve got. it is a style.. but define your letters a bit more. its hard to read. but keep it up.. also your letters get lost in the background. anyways.. ive been black bookin alot more lately. so here it is.. crit cratz-
snew - flow looks good and structure perfect. I'd start working on giving your letters some movement and working with bar thicknesses (and do a piece with 1222221907608912361 arows for lulz)
baconater...simple simple simple snew looks good but the little bits at the top of the n and w are a little weird.. monster your shit looks good as usual working on handstyles a little bit more lately View attachment 428947 View attachment 428948 just trying to mess around and make it look all gross or whatever
i really like a few of those hands, do a whole name throw in that style, i can already think of a way to do your whole name in those types of letters
hell yeah thanks guys..umm yeah i've been having some trouble with the "i" and "d" you wouldn't wanna do an exchange or something would you?
No one will probably be bothered to click this, since i cant get img tags to work, but, crits if you do? http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/3091/dsc01079rv6.jpg
View attachment 429083 for anyone whos going to say go simple, bombing science seems to be the only place who says that.