i get no critts mad gay pie your letters are dope especially the a, i would bite that shit all day lol
only thing i have against yours is maybe extend the middle bar of your E's and loose the quotation marks.....what about m,e???
the piece looks like its says rese, and the bottom simp kinda looks like pie ish, no beef just my opinion. and your throw need work
your not the first person to say about it looking like it says rese......i'll do another one later...and oh?
Resp, I don't like the bottom simp either. As for the bigger one, the new S looks alot better and as for the P, instead of curving the bottom to the right, try curving it back in to the left to make it look more like a P.
hahaha don;t worry i don;t think the simp is anything special... as for the P....i'll give it a go.....but i'm not sure if that'll mess with the flow?
It isnt your style. Style takes years to develop. If the person who says its " dope " is " dope " himself , then take notice but if its some whack bitch toy like SilentChaos ... dont get to hyped .. cos the chances are they dont have a fuckign clue what theyre talking about .. because i know ... i used to have tons of people telling me my shit wildstyles with 1837 arrows on each and every letter was dope .. and i was like fuck yahhhhh ... then the people who actually know what theyre talking about gave me a BIG JUICY SEXY REALITY CHECK .. that im not actally dope .. its just that people who are toy think that other toys work is sick. I dont necessarily like your stuff , but i dont think its good , its like .. half SUCK half OKAY .. so its ... Sukay .. but i do think your kinda ahead of your game abit ... talking abut your style , people think its dope , etc. etc. and thats what gets me about you ....... ........this comment here ... thats what progression is ... simple ... simple is progression ... its impossible to progress letters without doing simples ... because thats the stage your at ... your still finding decent letters to start off with to progress onto ... your letters at the moments in my opinion arnt all THAT good ... they need tweaking ... alot ... because your jumping the gun with extensions before even thinking about adding F L O W to your letters ... its like this ... SIMPLE LETTERS , SIMPLE LETTER WITH BENDS , SIMPLE LETTER WITH SMALL ADDONS .. then thats when your begin to reach a consistant flow in your peices ... THEN moving onto extensions is a completly different kettle of sharks ... because theres is tons to take into consideration with extensions ... i for one have never been too big on them .. i rarely ever add them to the letters i do ... but knowing where , when and how to add extensions to a letter without making your peice overcroweded , ugly , unproportionate and above all most , lacking an overall flow is a different ball game to learn. You better fucking take note on what i just typed here .. its probably the biggest essay iv ever done in my life . Btw how old are you ?
Resp: I don't think so, the R curves back in to the left, so I think it'll be fine if the P does also.
Wha yous mean by beutiful ? He just reminds me of how i was when i was at his stage. I sure hope hes younger than me though haha.
lol, by beautiful, I mean that was a well put-together crit. Very nice, very nice. If you had written that for a school paper, I'd have given you an A+
Resp: As already said, your P looks like an e. Other than that, I like the style of your letters with that shading and whatnot. OhSnap: Your letters look great as usual. Is that a musical note on the right side of this one? Colors are dope, too. This sketch sucks, but I'm still playing around with the structure on these letters. Crits are appreciated. View attachment 429399
saje - keep working it, your progressing. Tips* make bars more consistent for now, and a bit more flow. mass - my thoughts exactly ohsssnaaaap - nice...as usual. Only thing I'd really say is a dif colour scheme, at least for a band. The brown is kinda boring. What type of white paint pen did u use for highlights? resp - not a fan of the fill, it clean though. my ish. [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4196/dsc01098ef3.jpg