Sarz - Letters are decent, throws could use some work. Hoer - The sketch looks dope, except the H seems different for some reason. I dont know why. View attachment 429965 Im working on my coloring. Yes I realize its bad, but I need to start coloring somewhere .
ahoy. cool fill. work on flow. fills. bad fill. go more simple hoer, pretty niffty. get new markers. sars. go simplier bigel, your r lacks. cool letters tho.
Ahoy, try working on some original work, not STRAIGHT OUT OF GRAFFITI MAKER. Nocancomtrol, some of the bars are too thin and some of the letters are hard to make out. The shadow is off on some places. I do like the drips off the K though.
rooftop- i dunno if you bit that or not.. its clean and colored well.. im not gunna call bite cause i dont know.. but theres alot goin on but the overall letters are good but theres alot goin on and i dont really feel the star in the o. nocancontrol- the bars are off.. but the thin ones dont bother me half as much as the oversized ones. work on that for now.. wing- on that last peice you posted i think it looks pretty good except the I doesnt flow with the peice.. try reworking your I an id really llike to see you overlap some of your letters. i think it would help your pieces flow alot better. first time trying to bend my letters.. so be gentle.. crits daggs
snew - that is looking very good, flow is on spot, just that bottom left extension on the S is out of place, nothing major kanser - looks like you have the same problem as me, keeping the same style and flow throughout all the letters. I get pretty frustrated with this shit haha
Monster - I usually like your stuff. But its sooo messy. Sketch with pencil first and dont rush the outline of the sketch (its no race). Baaaaah, I know this is one of my worst sketchs. But I felt the need to sketch (Its hard to go a day without sketching ). View attachment 430036
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You know i spent atleast 15 - 20 minuets writing out that critizism for you .. and going by your past 2 sketches youv not even bothered to take one blind bit of notice. If your not going to take any advice given to you ... and continue to only take notice of the advice you want to hear ... then dont bother wasting peoples time whom are willing to go in depth and help you the best they can.
Well your basicley telling me to go simple, and Ive already stated that im not doing that. If you have any other idea of what I can do, then ill be more them argee able.
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Well then thats all i can tell you ... if your not willing to learn and just try to rush everything then i aint gonna help you laa ... why dont you get some pateince and realise graffiti isnt easy ... and to get original simple letters you need to work hard ... not just do a pencil sketch every day with the same old crappy extensions ... you have no clue about extensions ... i even told you to learn how to incorprate those ... but again you havnt bothered to take any notice what so ever ... you know wha fuck you ... continue to waste your time. If the real CAER and the Nemz was here theyd seriously butt rape you untill you listened. My butt is still hurting 2 years later Do what yeh want mate ... ill just watch. for talking.. View attachment 430135
anyone - way to stay simple but on that rune smooth out the leg of the R wings - i like your sketches but your N looks funny Klic - thats nice but it kinda looks funny. maybe cuz im used to your other simples this is what happens when your bored at 3 in the mornin crits??
yah i thought id try something different, and if i were you id go back to the style you were using when you did the exchange with me