Sick.. The S is too round at the bottom though .. kinda loses the flow abit. BiGel ALWAYSSSSSS FRESSHHHHHHHH ... exchange yeah do it
teser- shits dope but theres something about the bottom leg of the R i dont like skin- ur lines are a lil shaky these are some new ones i tried... workin with pencil crayon here :S:S:S
zade - i dont really like the crossbar of the A coming right from the leg. on the last two there are some problems in the 3d and when the D is completely behind the right leg of the A it makes the A look really flat.
Tezer- Fresh, not much else I can say Zof- Loving the E Zade- The letters seem too jumbled Bored in Deutsch class, says Camping is forbidden, ignore the V View attachment 430376
Tryin out mah new name: SHERM [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v190/findhimnkillhim/shermsketch.png
[Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000214.jpg some shit from a couple weeks ago, kils - nice shit, id just fix your s up and curve it some more sherm - looks pretty good but im not feeling the extensions on your s zade - make the edges of your bars round and not so sharp if you know what i mean skin - keep working on those simples there lookin good, id work on your s a little more baron - sick letters, i dont like your z and v though bigel - i have no clue what it says but it looks nice, ciner? zof - looks fresh, i dont like the arrows coming out of your z though tezer - ive always been a fan of your shit, that grimey shits a little to grimey for me though lol crits please
zof,tezer-dooooppeeeee baron-maybe try and keep letters thickness consistent? shpel-try and make your letters more bulky and less like spaghetti with 3d fluffy-nice simples first attempt at actualy colour in this style View attachment 430461 View attachment 430462
Zade- Not a fan of the D, maybe try a capital D instead, the little one just doesnt fit. Also, just work on the letter structure until you get it down, and then add the 3-d and sorts. Baron- The little separated part on the Ns looks a little out of place. rest is pretty sick tho Sherm- Looks dope, but not feelin the R, looks alot like a K, and the thing trailing off the end is a little much Kils- Those are dope, i like the idea of having the kils and slik front to back. Tried to do something more then just simples, )so it has some un neccessary extentions lol) for the front page of a new book.
and ill add this, Resp, the colour makes that style look alot better then it did in pencil. and the charachter isnt bad either.
directed towards militia.. I mean its just standard letters with excessive and repetitive extensions... I'ma upload a wildstyle in a sec here