noyu, im likeing the first one better than the second one...i like simple stuff better. what you guys think.? View attachment 430670
repost for more crits. I think that you REALLY need to work on your style. Also try to move away from bubble-letters. or at least change them up a little bit. It looks pretty obvious your a beginner, but just keep at it
simple...little bit of a different style than normal whack shit that i fucked up but might as well post it anyways flash-its ite just keep doing what your doing and youll get better soon graffda-do stuff more like the first one but ditch the round edge things and make yur y flow more nenone- simples.... and quit posting that horizontally the page is ways too wide whahappened- looks like scribbles to me edit: and noes- looks peretty good just fix the e a little
Simples? what the fuck kind of criticism is that. If you can't understand a modified style... you need to check out some better writers, man.
dude honestly, from your sketches you cant draw a straight line so shut up. at this point, you have nothing on nen.
cuz you can judge all my shit from wht i did in 5 min for the top 15 for the bottom get the fuck out of hhere....you think nens fucking random bar no letter wildstyles are good?
Damn dude you're a joke. I'd like to see if you can do anything close to a wildstyle... you're just recycling graffiti that's been around forever man. What you're doing is nothing original or artistic at all. Also, you don't see enough wildstyles if you can't read mine, because compared to shit like SINER (los angeles) its easily readable.
HAHAHAHAHAH You're hating on me and you can't even write your own name. You fucking wrote SWIW hahahahahahaha there needs to be a garbage forum for people who are even worse than the worse toys and think they can tell other people how to write.