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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    whatever happen to give crits to get them
     
  2. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  3. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    cyto - go simpler, good effort though
    hal - clean per usual. i want to see a non massive extension/arrow piece from you
    rotter-sexy
    zade - new to graff thread. good try....but doint use bud as a theme until you rock
    darkiest - throw seems decent, simple seems wobbly..and wat arrows?

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    critt me
     
  4. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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  5. jester.onest

    jester.onest Senior Member

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    Bizar, how come the last letter has the purple shine but none of the others do? Get rid of the extensions on the R
     
  6. C-Lurk

    C-Lurk Senior Member

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    View attachment 432278

    i suck, i'm better with stickers...

    Caser - like the color job
    Klock/Cyto - Feeling the last 2
    Bizar - Needs work, especially the R. Try more fluid lines, and no bumps. Also no random shine marks, like mentioned.
     
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  7. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    1st one is dopiest.
     
  8. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    can we have another small battle? i wanna get in it this time.
     
  9. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    the shines are not random, but ignore them anyways
     
  10. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Mask - thats nice but it looks weird to me
    Bizar - Too edgy but nice still
    Caster - Your C is weird. it doesnt extend all the way at the bottom. keep it up tho.

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    my E is hurtin on this one

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    gota change up my S in this one

    CRITS??
     
  11. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  12. EasyLife

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  13. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    Any Semi Toys wana do a exchange?
     
  14. C-Lurk

    C-Lurk Senior Member

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    There is no way you used bars for that...
     
  15. EasyLife

    EasyLife Member

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    ha alright check this shit out! i used bars, i was high as fuck but i think it looks good ya dig.
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    then i fucked it up by tryin to color it up.
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    holla back
    crits in edit.
    my fault double post idk why computer does that shit
    For real i'm gettin sent back again. ahahaha, damn i thought this shit was clean.
    *sigh* arite.

    here are my crits anyway

    backalley- that shit is hot, lovin the roted and gore tip

    cyon- i like it, arrows an eerthang, i wanna see it with color

    block/klock- I dunno man its kinda weak. the extension on the B is wack in the first and the O is fucked up in the second, you also changed the 3d so it looks like the shadow is directly behind the word an i think it looks bad. Klocks wasn't much better but i guess it just takes practice.

    Epoc- diggin the oarnge and blue scheme, i also like the semi-transparent lettering, that shit is hot. not feelin the C tho, looks stubby.

    Bi2er- i'm tired of looking at that, time for a new one.

    C-lurk- little sketchy but i like it, spec. the salesman

    scheme- feelin the first one, not the second

    leaks- first one your on it with the E, 2nd too much space tween the legs of the A
     
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  16. Tokenkaligreens

    Tokenkaligreens Elite Member

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    easy life new to graff thread.
     
  17. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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  18. C-Lurk

    C-Lurk Senior Member

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  19. TaskOne

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  20. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    go simpler easy life , looks crap.