cyto - go simpler, good effort though hal - clean per usual. i want to see a non massive extension/arrow piece from you rotter-sexy zade - new to graff thread. good try....but doint use bud as a theme until you rock darkiest - throw seems decent, simple seems wobbly..and wat arrows? [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5683/dsc01105hk3.jpg critt me
Bizar, how come the last letter has the purple shine but none of the others do? Get rid of the extensions on the R
View attachment 432278 i suck, i'm better with stickers... Caser - like the color job Klock/Cyto - Feeling the last 2 Bizar - Needs work, especially the R. Try more fluid lines, and no bumps. Also no random shine marks, like mentioned.
Mask - thats nice but it looks weird to me Bizar - Too edgy but nice still Caster - Your C is weird. it doesnt extend all the way at the bottom. keep it up tho. my E is hurtin on this one gota change up my S in this one CRITS??
ha alright check this shit out! i used bars, i was high as fuck but i think it looks good ya dig. [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4240/bbpnclswa121108vo2.th.jpg then i fucked it up by tryin to color it up. [Broken External Image]:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8682/bbclrswa121108yw9.th.jpg holla back crits in edit.
ha alright check this shit out! i used bars, i was high as fuck but i think it looks good ya dig. [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4240/bbpnclswa121108vo2.th.jpg then i fucked it up by tryin to color it up. [Broken External Image]:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8682/bbclrswa121108yw9.th.jpg holla back crits in edit. my fault double post idk why computer does that shit For real i'm gettin sent back again. ahahaha, damn i thought this shit was clean. *sigh* arite. here are my crits anyway backalley- that shit is hot, lovin the roted and gore tip cyon- i like it, arrows an eerthang, i wanna see it with color block/klock- I dunno man its kinda weak. the extension on the B is wack in the first and the O is fucked up in the second, you also changed the 3d so it looks like the shadow is directly behind the word an i think it looks bad. Klocks wasn't much better but i guess it just takes practice. Epoc- diggin the oarnge and blue scheme, i also like the semi-transparent lettering, that shit is hot. not feelin the C tho, looks stubby. Bi2er- i'm tired of looking at that, time for a new one. C-lurk- little sketchy but i like it, spec. the salesman scheme- feelin the first one, not the second leaks- first one your on it with the E, 2nd too much space tween the legs of the A
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