sesh- good work. just keep letters the same size throughout. and if you plan on using those colors again, try using a darker outline, it'll make it stand out more. crits for these please- [Broken External Image]:http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/DSC01257.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/DSC00629.jpg
Good spot but you definitely need to work on your letters. Stick to straight simples for now. The handstyle needs work as well.
Speaking of a One Liner, can someone help me with one lining my new name? cops are everywhere where i live so i gotta be quick, and one long line is faster then doin individual letters plz pm me...i really need some help
Oh my god Cops are fucking everywhere you should be able to do your tag fast even if isnt a one liner Why don't you go do what everyone else did and practice Fuck toys these days want eveything done fro them
*LoST* I like the second one better than the first, but the S.T.R. looks a little crowded into your actual tag. Nice placement. Keep at it. dub deuces, Baszma
Can I get some crits please? My piece is back on page 1033 towards the bottom... *PeeInTheShower*: I like it, is it Sheng or Skeng? I would make that a little more clear, but I like the colors and the letter form. Just make it a little cleaner and clearer and you should be good. dub deuces, Baszma
Pee in shower, don't listen to baszma, sorry to burst your bubble, but it looks like abosolute shit. No bars, no structure, no flow, too small, bad can control, bad color combonations. Tell your "friend" to hit the blackbooks. Ice age, I really like your 3D, wish you could have pulled off the auroa a little better and the M looks a little odd, kinda like part of the V structure's 3D isn't flowing right with the other half, unless its twisted, but your A is sick. Lost, no bars, weird flow, shakey letters, odd structure and a bad handstlye, back to basics. And to everyone else, please take into account if someone says "That shit is awesome!" ant they precieve to be toy, they may not have a full understanding of what makes something good or not.
Ice Age- The baby's room looks great! Lucky girl. Lost- Those Kin bombs are fucking TERRIBLE.. I'm sorry. I rarely say that to someone, but you shouldn't be trying to get noticable spots if you can't paint yet. Practice under a bridge or some shit. The handstyles are filthy too. (filthy bad...not filthy good...) sorry. Not trying to be mean. Trying to be honest so you don't get clowned. Have I seen worse? Yes... Was it on a rooftop? NOOOOOOOOO!
u ruined heaven spots kin , better get up somewhere where ppl dont go , thats where i train so ppl dont see my toy shit.
wow wow wow. yeah his shit doesnt look the best ever. but dont dis him cuz of the spot he did. atleast he knows where to find good spots. toy or not, getting up everywhere will atleast get you noticed. and in the future hell get better and hell remember how to easily get back up those spots anyway. id rather have a toy hitting up heaven spots so it gets me motivated to do better. id be thinking "wow...how the fuck is he doing that and not me?"
nah i hate when loads of spots are ruined by toyz(im toy too ) well toys should practice till get up , thats what i think , u cant change the way i think so...
will you guys stop talking about spots? or stop talking period. this is toy BOMB/PIECES. not olick and bink1's philosophy 101