Dope. You didnt really need that extention on the first A, but thats just me. Hope your gettin laid for that one bro
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any crits?

 

Thanks, I can't crit throws but with the piece you should work with simples on the side. The key to keeping your style and improving it at the same time is to do at least the same amount of simples as pieces.

 

Thanks man, I'll keep that in mind.

 

Sap, the first 2 look great. Not really feeling the throws though, and I would drop names like NOTE or HAZE. They're super played. And if DESU is referring to 4chan gay stuff, drop that too.

 

thanks man...all of the throws are exchanges for people on PG

 

fuckk yeaahhh!!!

this shit is hella fresh. dope fills and solid letters. if i had the motivation to do an exchange.. i'd suggest one.

dope bubbles!! start trying new things, bend em in wierd spots. thin the bars a bit make em flow more

that bitch is hella sexy too

 

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crits on mine

 

eskimo nice sketch you trying to hook up with a russian girl?

simr im not really a fan of the extentions on the m or the r but everything else is cool

 

anymore for mine?

 

your second sketch was your strongest, the throws are weak keep practising

 

Simr- I like the letters bro but I would work on your extentions, they kinda kill it.
Sap- Im feelin the first one except the thing hanging from the A.

 

last bump

 

don't overlap the bottom of your Z officer frank

 

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haha...yeah ..that hate piece was for a battle...I jus threw that quote in last minute...needless to say I didn't win

 

i like that eskimo, iffy about the R tho it looks squashed, try it with out over lapping ..

n the A's dont need the big lines coming off them behind other letters ..

 

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holla

 

sleepytime bullshits.

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oh snap and tasty both fresh as shit by the way.
spore - sawright. not a fan of those r's. or the e really.
rune - same thing really. letters are eh. keep at it.
bizar - i dunno, there's always something about your letters that im not about. maybe its the z. you're boys got steez tho.
sap - not really my thing man. keep working with them bars.