Smooth: Everything looks good. Only downside I can see is that K. Stand the top bar up more. Vitamins: Good stuff, clean up the lines and I find the M seems just a tad too fat. Other than that, nice. Thrice: Maybe make the bottom bar on the E just a little thicker and move the whole letter over to the right more. Looks a little small too compared to the other letters. Crits??? Just working on the base of the letters now, once that's got the OK, I'll finish it. [Broken External Image]:http://wimg.co.uk/F6qwYT.jpg
dont overlap your "s" so much, and work on spacing, other than that its looking good your on the right track
Revid! Great to see you back, and i'll try that out thanks. Cash-name isn't very original but you have the right idea. Be sure you break the letters down into bars so you understand the structure more when you start doing more advanced changes in letters.
Thanks for the crits everyone. I'll fix up that S, after looking at it on here, it looks pretty bad. Thrice: Yeah, I'm just practicing letters, I've got a name I'm using, but don't want it posted around just cause of safety reasons.
This was a sketch, but I did it in photoshop (rushed it actually). But here ya go. View attachment 435242
some doodles.. i like the black E [Broken External Image]:http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/3391/rasek66ce5.jpg thrice, make your E thicker and a bit taller. simps are lookin tight
thanks rasek, i like that black E too. And the top stroke of that black S is fucking dope as hell, keep that shit.
This looks sick bro, bu your right the E is a little off... prolly needs to be a little bigger-- other than that it looks dope bro.
[Broken External Image]:http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7991/dsc00491rl2.jpg old quickie what u guys think tho?
my stuff seems to keep dissapearing from the blackbook thread, so although i wouldnt classify myself as a toy anymore, others seem to, so ill play the part and post my stuff here till i "gain permission" i guess. View attachment 435261 View attachment 435262 View attachment 435263 View attachment 435264 View attachment 435265 View attachment 435266 View attachment 435267
master the last one is dope but the T covers the E too much View attachment 435270 The Y's wack and I think Ive seen the 2nd character befor but not sure, this is the name I might be switching to once I move up to detroit