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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. TastySesamcrew

    TastySesamcrew Senior Member

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    Why would jetpack go for wildstyles? Not every graffiti artist has to do wildstyles or is that just me? And use the crits you give ink me for yourself. Not hating but I think you don't have any idea of what you're talking about
     
  2. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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  3. Ink me

    Ink me Senior Member

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    Zase- Im diggin the top throwie type. I like the S in your handstyle too.

    Thanks for the crits people. I reffered to the New to graffiti thread and started working on simples. I tried to throw something together using bars. Im not happy with it but I will post it anyways. How do you avoid deadspace? P.S. Disregard arrows.

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  4. militia

    militia Senior Member

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    thicken up your bars bro, also, less breaks in the bars, make it even simpler, straight bars
     
  5. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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  6. muddyluv

    muddyluv Senior Member

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    checkit.please critisize.muddy.
     

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  7. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    Muddy keep working on it, work with simples as well, and try to make your letters overlap each other the other way around... like the M in front of U and so on and so forth...
     
  8. T-jay

    T-jay Senior Member

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    zase-feeling the z(exept the extension on the bottom), the s needs some improvements though, the throwie is good
    inkme-make the bars thicker, drop the Arrow,the 3d is alrite
    stussy the r and the look wierd try not to make the loop of the R so big
     
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  9. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    and the what?
     
  10. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    since my grammar sucks ill help those who dont know what they mean with bars or dont know how to use them ai40.tinypic.com_2iuc4sy.jpg
     
  11. T-jay

    T-jay Senior Member

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    and the y, but i think its just that its alittle bit smaller than the other letters
     
  12. ColorOptional

    ColorOptional Member

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    Tasty Your the definiation of a hater! Why dont you take jetpacks dick out of your mouth and insert your dads back in. At least I know Im still a toy............
     
  13. TastySesamcrew

    TastySesamcrew Senior Member

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    I love jetpacks dick, it's so tasty!
     
  14. GETRAD

    GETRAD Senior Member

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    muddy- looks a little to bubbly, change the colors, keep the character
    stussy- looking good, i think the 3d is a little off though
    inkme- make it alot simpler, no need to steer away from the letters on your keyboard

    trying to do something new:
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    self crit: really off balance, regretting the red
     
  15. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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    I havent post nothing in a while, but heres something for ya.
     

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  16. CandyRain88

    CandyRain88 Senior Member

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    you spelt like ltke
     
  17. ESKids

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  18. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    skin- SO much better.. the bars are at least the same width for the most part..
    Es- i would probly go a little simpler.. either define a throwie style or use bars..
    Getrad- go simpler.. keep your bars even.. work on strait letters..
    Zase- good work with bars.. people could learn from you.

    Now i know this is kind of wack but its all the steps that my style has made since i started writing over the summer.. i thought it was a cool idea but yea..

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    crits
     
  19. balance42020

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  20. get a grip!

    get a grip! Senior Member

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    to everyone in here, use simple bars, look at your keyboard, those are the letters, not those letters and arrows, just those letters. coloring isn't necessary since you are developing. and don't "rep" a crew if you can't even get a simple style down on paper.