^word....

 

first time posting here,

id love to hear some constructive crits.

thanks in advance!

 

1. i sid it was the toy form so i figured i wouldnt litter the exsperts form
2.?
3.i just exsplained that i want tips not to be told to quite because i truly love this no matter how many people tell me to quite

im not giving up... like cancer

 

I aint gonna quit any time soon either but I'd like to know I'm putting up something nice
Nobody's telling you to quit just to get better.

 

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garbage that first one is secks.

 

hoer - really like the throwie but not feelin your partner's.

 

hoer, in my opinion. your one of the most underrated motherfuckers here. i like your shit a lot.

you can tell this motherfuckers got skills.. just look at those circles

but your arrows are wack as fuck..

peace b, keep it up

 

that negro hoer tears shit up correctly.

 

thanks fellaz. your right about the arrows rae rae. ill take em back to my shop and fix em up in no time.

 

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keep this shit up mane.

 

any advice? thanks

 

my advice is keep sketchin and if you do paint take ur time, if you have the time.

hoer-dude im diggin that first piece

rasek- why are you still in this forum? haha

heres a recent canvas of mine, ak-47's baby
crits? im not to happy with the way the writting turned out..

 

yo, that yellow ones pretty sick

 

hoer- your shits real nice. only crit i got would be make the e and the r the same size as the h and o. but that really isnt much of a crit

 

Muse pointed me in the direction of Hoer and told me to check em out when we were discussing the all around best on BS and it's pretty clear with his mentallity and the style that Hoers coming up quick.
Just dont let it get to your head, kid
Everyone on BS is a dick so dont join that club, lol

 

Rasek-Lookin realllllly dope. keep it up!
Hoer-Likin the throwie. The piece aint my style but hey thats just me. Clean work just not me ya dig?
Impulse-Practice practice practice

This is my second time paintin and it was dark as hell. I fucked the S up pretty bad but I didnt wanna waste time tryin to fix it.



Crits?

 

Your gonna find out real fast if your going to stick with painting or art. Specially since the biggest critics are here in the forums. They can be extremely harsh but you know somthing, Its all for the better. Its gonna make you hungry for whatever it is your working for.

 

rasek thats dope
but the middle bar of the a is too much overlapped
i mean watch out with the overlapping of vital bars