new to graff thread and work on your bars(as far as your letters go).

 

Thanks for your opinion

 

atomik thats some good stuff, great colors
menus you got too many stuff going on with your work,
mue stay away from arrows for now, focus more on your letters

webs
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sabor
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sobe
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demoh
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i would really appreciate some crits

 

D E M O-- i like them a lot. i wanna see the Webs one if you made it where E is just one line and the B is just one line, instead of 2 separate parts each. like example how the loops for the b are separate and go over the back line of the B.... do you know what i mean?? sorry, it's hard to explain. otherwise, really sick, you should fill them in and use crazy colors and everything

 

happy new year bsholes![Broken External Image]:http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/9374/screencapture1ka4.png

the outline is hot pink btw, my scanner doesent get neon colors for some reason


demo i like that hit me up for an exchange homie

 

i duno what the fuck jus happen. i tried to crit menus but ended up way down here. anyways
Menus - start all the way over simple. you have potential.
mue - i dont really like that at all lose the swirls an make your letters less blocky
demo - hot shit. keep it up
bspolice - ive always felt your shit no homo but your n looks a lil weird but im FEELIN the S

 

something my boy did.
crits?

 

MUE- no arrows, work on your bars
DEMO-I like the bars, theres decent flow, only problem is all those names are taken by established writters(except Demoh)

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bump for crits

 

crits?

 

bump
menus-makes your letters more bulky and and kill everything else
snap-rockin' simples ....but your fill looks scruffy

 

Resp, those simples are fucking hot.

 

why,thank you,kind sir.

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mue- do the coloring later,work on letters.
demo- nice shit.
b.s.- the coloring is sick ,love it.
grace-nice n simple
timeless-keep it up , looks great.
que- dont connect Q to U looks like W somehow,split em up.
resp-first simple of your last post,is dope.(just the second leg of R is too short. i think)

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loose the s

 

haven't posted in a while. mostly because everything i sketch is always a pen freestyle.
here's some recent stuff...within the past week atleast.


a sketch for my girl. says DBLAO! if you can't read. ignore the handstyle. please.
orange highlighters are ill.

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and some shit i did at work the other day with sharpies. lawl.

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2nd one's a cell phone flick. :\

 

I dont like the look of the P, change that and it'll look nice

 

nice! the pencil one you posted earlier sucks compared to these, but i mean that in a good way cuz the other ones look good. they're really smooth. make the pencil one smooth like those and maybe make the O like your other O's cuz it looks kinda weird right now. keep it up

 

Too hungover for crits..

The A is horrible, couldnt fit the second E.