wow tryn that shit is much nicer to look at than your old tag...somebody's been practicin. flick for talkin... View attachment 438622
thank you any more crits would be appreciated. especially on the second. it does't really flow and stuff, so i know it's not that great erroroner-- looks dope from here, i wanna see a close up
Shayk, start off slow. Just get a wedge marker, or even a pencil and sketch "SHAYK" just like that. Copy a few fonts and then slowly start to add your own style to it. You have to crawl before you walk.
i know you guys are gona say dont paint that shit in public and start simple but i feal so restricted on papper and it always turns out curvey when i do it fast
yes, don't do that in public, paper is practice and you need practice.. but it's obviously too late. i don't get it. you wants crits and everything and people tell you go simpler and start out slow and you don't listen. go simplerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
write your name like a keyboard does. SHAYK or pick a simpler name at first... i started with Bitr1 and then decided scrap is better. just practice making EACH letter look nice and simple. but flow at the same time. actually dont even worry about flow yet just make each letter look good.
try making your arrows more pointy and less rooftop-like. lol here's an example: View attachment 438759
funny..i use to/sometimes still write skrap ^ take lined paper...use 2 lines at a time writing it normally how you would, and it develops.. it takes time. "graffiti is the art of progression" remember this quote for as long as you write
View attachment 438760 Try'n- first one pure dope, second one not so much shayk- u probally hear this alot but .. SIMPLE! best way to start, ur first one looks like its cursive writing, second one... i duno...
so heres my tag ikno its not good but crits would b greatly appriciated havent been writing to long a couple months n i kinda forget a tag is prolly one of the single most important aspects of writing n getn ur name out n shit so any help would b great =D [Broken External Image]:http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/009-1.jpg
[/IMG] dont mind anything in the green its all just mess ups just crits on the blue one please -thanks
wat letter is the first cuz thers no connection if its a D and the N? lookslike a backwards U...start at the basics...DEN
Eh That vamp tag is lookin pretty damn good bro and oene you're looking good too I jsut don't feel that r :/
rapist -- still a dope hand style slikkk-- looks cool, kep it up den-- you should define the D more and i'm not really feelin the quotes how one's on the bottom and the other's on the top. if you wnt them you should put them both on top imo. keep it up and stay simple for now, it should develop nicely. and thanks for those who gave me crits and stuff. i wasn't always feeling the old tag on the bottom cuz it kinda flowed up until the N and then got ruined. ima keep working on more.