Libre- Your style has improved a lot since I last saw it.
Jers- I'm not feeling the R at all but the rest of it is hot.

 

monster that pretty ill throwie
worms why u join a gang if u werent gunna b down foreal???

 

... i never joined a gang. alot of my friends did but i was painting and drawing rather then doin what they do

 

crits crits crits?

 

i think you should give me those markers so you can focus on your shitty letters.

 

art rooms markers.

tell me what to focus on about them.

 

wares not feeling the colors but the letters look pretty decent..the r looks a little like a k but no biggie

once again monster fresh shit...i love sketchy looking sketches like that
View attachment 441824 messing around with useless extensions and basically faking the funk

 

tride i like it except for your e if you kept the bottom the same but changed the top hafl to n uppercase u it would looked better in my personal opinion
shat somthing out done mind the wack colouring next to it i was tryn do n oldschool new york fill with mad colours n shit... needless to say i failed n e wayz
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Tride fix up the T, looks like an E, otherwise nice.
Monster, fresheezy!
Sore, looks fat, keep working on it, good stuff

Pen freestyle;
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pretty good for a freestyle i guess. one thing i did notice on a couple pieces you posted a couple days ago is that you have both sharp lines and rounded lines. for example, the bottom right of the O and the top right of the N. you know what I'm saying? It just sticks out really bad imo.

i like it though. i think you got a dope name to work with and you are on the right track.

 

pretty good for a freestyle i guess. one thing i did notice on a couple pieces you posted a couple days ago is that you have both sharp lines and rounded lines. for example, the bottom right of the O and the top right of the N. you know what I'm saying? It just sticks out really bad imo.

i like it though. i think you got a dope name to work with and you are on the right track.

 

I like a bit of contrast, but I'll do some super square stuff soon, haha.
Cheers though : )

 

nah i like the roundness of the n..it would look weird if it was square..one thing i would say is maybe figure out how to add one of those extensions like on the i to the o to balance it out...

 

I just use all random shit, doesn't need to be perfect and symetrical in my eyes, I just do it to progress and keep going at letter forms, throw in shit that complements it
The crits are good though, keeps me pushing it, freestyling helps too
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something more 'square'

 

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dont got shit to color it with

 

thang god you would have wasted your time no offence, go read the new to graff thread and get familiar with bars

 

dank read the new to graff thread....shit hurts my eyes

 

Dank man, i dont wanna sound like an asshole and all cuz im not really that good either, but seriously man? are there even letters in there?