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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    The separate bars are all part of my style man... But I did overdo the detail a bit on this one.

    Your letters are kind of stiff... Mess with the bars a bit.
     
  2. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    hah nahh man. i didnt mean drop the shit. i can see you like that style but what i ment was like pull them together a little more. would define the letter alot more. the N got had me thinkin cause the bar on the right was to far from the other. shit. i suck at explaining shit.

    fixed it up a little?
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  3. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    hey ok so my style is gettin better and everything but i cant get down any "wildsyle" shit like when i try and include arrows or lines that go off the letter it ends up lookin fucked up any advice??
     
  4. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    uhh simples!
    new to graff thread!
     
  5. SNAP!

    SNAP! Senior Member

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    fuckin glare on that freight page...
    last ones my sketch i took the othernight, almost washed it haa
     
  6. Zarb

    Zarb Senior Member

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  7. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    fucked up the Z and the fill didnt turn out like i wanted...

    Tasty- nice letters, the fill doesnt look bad... but good luck on painting it lol
    Eskimo- Letter dont look bad, not sure if im into the R or not though...Work on your simples ( the six)
    Riot- style is coming together... not sure if i like the extension on the R and the one going behind the piece
    Scone- throw and simple look good... keep working on it... the N on the simple... dont think it should overlap its self...
    Zarb- New graffiti thread... and do keyboard letters

    crits?
     
  8. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    eskimo that style is a killer man
    great letters for a whole car
    rays try some overlapping 3d and fix the right bar of the a
    scone idk whats with the 3d nivrel i like that colours and that fill oldskool thing
    but work on the letters u cant really go wilder on that stuff do some bars it makes u evolute better just my tought
    zipper no way gose check ur shadows u have like 3 suns in there
    i would recomand u doing some bars too like the Z dont do tight blocks with lil outlines

    and for me i went purple on this joint
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  9. fitzy36

    fitzy36 Senior Member

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    crappy throw, messy

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  10. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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  11. .HATESONE.

    .HATESONE. Banned

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    you man this is fresh but the d looks alot like a p and also....ive told you this like 100 times before but




    ..work on your handstyles fool.
     
  12. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    ok so here are a few of mine i really dont like the die the second one is ash and enhanced
    and the third is Independent so need some crits?

    [Broken External Image]:http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/ind...ditAlbumPhoto&albumID=579536&imageID=51216832

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    [Broken External Image]:http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/ind...ditAlbumPhoto&albumID=579536&imageID=51216824

    Eskimo your shit is tight as hell i like how its all put together and shit
    scone i like the train one i like the colors on all of yours and like eskimo well put together
     
  13. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    ok what the hell why wont my pics show up???
     
  14. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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  15. Squibsorz

    Squibsorz Senior Member

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    eskimo id work on that N alittle bit. at first it almost looked like a K with a wierd notch on it
     
  16. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    That's what everyone says. I'll try.

    BIPOLAR TAPE RECORDER DISORDER

    [Broken External Image]:http://fc69.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/022/d/4/Bipolar_TRD_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

    FUCK the vowels. I don't color 'em.
    I dunno...

    Crits
    Dek- Go back to simples. The coloring is grungy too.
    Zase- Now that's a flow! Real nice... Purple...
    Rayz- It seems as if you know what went wrong. Just take away that little extension on the A.
    Zipper- No block letters!!!
    Scone- Nice for the most part.
     
  17. Squibsorz

    Squibsorz Senior Member

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    man i love that shit though.

    What markers you use to colors that? and what are the names of the colors?
     
  18. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Prismacolor markers. They're real expensive so just steal them off the rack.
    I use...
    Apple Green
    Cloud Blue
    Light Cerulean Blue
    Light Blue
    Violet Mist
    20% Cool Gray
    50% Cool Gray

    And I always use a Pilot V Ball Grip (Extra Fine) for the outline. Sounds gay right?
     
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  19. BEAS one

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    ESKIMO...that shit is hot man...u puttin anything in the middle?


    for another forum's battle...crits on this?


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  20. ThatguywhodrinksTea

    ThatguywhodrinksTea Senior Member

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    dope shadow on "smash ta piece theatre".. looks sick