Yeah, my capo throw hasn't developed at all in forever, so I think I'm gonna change to Dope full time......any crits on the piece, jet? I write Caporegime, I know who Cap is, I'm not a fool, I wouldn't try to take his name.....and I'm thinking of changing, so I'm practicing both right now.
thicken the bars a lil bit and get rid of that arrow on your C since it makes it look like an S. get a piece of wood and practice straight lines and parallel lines. the reason it looks so sloppy is cuz a lot of your lines are wavy. buckle an whatnot. an watch the 3D, its fucked up in some spots. again, practicing parallel lines will help with that
smoothnuts already writes dope. and from the looks of it hes has cleaner stuff =] EEEE FIIIIIIIGHHHHTT...
capo-- make the bars thicker and go simpler in your piece. that dope throw is wack and i wouldn't really write that cuz as everyone else says, someone already writes that and he's better than you. the capo throw looks alright though so i would keep working on that one.
runs into smoothnuts. lol. picture real nuts and running into them just so hapens that olick just got done droppin a load and hasnt put his pants on that turn yah on?
dude,we've talked about that on aim already,i don't care if you wack it while we're talking ....just don't tell me.
this is the worst advice i've heard. stick a knife in your eye. you know nothing. and if your uncreative enough to write dope. dont get butthurt when another 100 people do. its just as stupid to write as "Dank"
Hey I'm no uncreative, I just like the letters....fun to work with.... and yeah I know other people write it, but big deal they're not around here. And honestly I don't know who to listen to right now....because Jet has some sick shit, but whatever...
He was just a big of a toy as everyone else until everyone started say RASEK THATS DOPE! now his ego is a little inflated. no beef. just truth.
^^basically. im glad i was able to offend everyone with one comment that was entirely the truth. ive given up being nice on the internet cuz its the same shit everytime i happen to look at this thread. stupid kids tellin each other to go simpler on a simple. honestly. dont listen to me based on my work. listen to me if you feel my point is valid, i could care less if you wanna take my advice or not. im offering it because i feel it would help your piece a lot. especially if you ask for my critism than dismiss it.. im cocky cuz i got to where i am by myself. this thread never helped. ive gotten a handful of good tips since ive started posting here.
alright i guess you have a valid point. only reason i said go simpler on the piece, and i guess i should have been more specific, was because i felt he didn't need all the doodads and whatnot w/ the O and stuff like the arrow and extensions. he should just get the bars and letter structure down first. i still however, think that Dope throw was wack, and if you think it's fresh like you said then thats just a difference in opinion but i, just like you, was just offering criticism to help his piece. i mean, whatever, your shit is dope, have all the inflated ego you want, but dont tell me to go stick a knife in my eye for trying to help someone else. if crits dont work for you maybe they could work for someone else. no beef, peace.