paper tiger, you got a fairly good idea of simples. add some 3D and just keep sketchin
task, you've got a lot of ugly arrows. and your A is extremely hidden
mantis, dont get butthurt over my opinion fuck. you've got mad ugly ass extensions and its sloppy.

touched some shit up. the S is prolly gonna stay cuz ive got a stupid amount of pencil burn under it. and its in the middle an all that shit /lazy

ill get around to fixing up the K, it bugs me now that i look twice

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rasek that shit is hot

 

Rasek is probably the dopest who still posts in the toy forum. Keep it up.

 

task-i thionk your extentions are too square for your style
rasek-i thought your E was an S at first....but still.....dope
my latest whackness
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i like those moreso than your prior work. solid simples. i dont like that R on that red two letter you got. the stenciled people are dope. slap one of those on a boombox. know what im sayin?

 

no??what does that mean?
and i accidently uploaded the frong flick :/
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bump

 

rasek- the way the R and the A go in together doesn't seem right to me. the rest is fine.
task- the A seems lost under all the extensions
sewr- the extensions come off awkward on the first piece, the second one looks like it has potential if you can clean it up and run with it.
anoe- all your 3D should be going one way. the N looks fine. keep the two side bars in the A the same width and scrap the O and E.

pen shit:

inked it, but i can't color worth a damn so i gave up on the last half:

more simples:

 

paper tiger. work on flow.a nd your balence of bars
andre, watch you bars. and keep on trying to figure out that flow.
RUIN, imo you should let the letters sit on that bar the uin part.
resp, on your simples loosen up your letters. let them breath. lol.
task, the a is a little undifined because its kinda behind everything. so just make that a bit better. but its not good wild style. but if you keep on working on it then it will be legit one day.
sews, on the secound on one, the e is a bit undifned. the bottom part is missing kinda so work on that. and i would stay alittle bit more simple. but its legit if you keep on working on it.
mants, i'll get sstarted on that pic.

 

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Random sketches
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not finished... probably wont finish it

BS- dope throw
Rasek- shit looks good, but not sure if i like how big the end of the K is... idk

 

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the o still kinda loos like an a

 

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some shit i did last night.

 

DROP SCIENCE FICTION

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Crits!

Rayz- Nice job with the straight bars. Keep it up.
Paper- Clean it up a bit.
Guy Who Drinks Tea- Separate your bars just a bit.
Resp- I like the 3D. Paint markers?

 

Rasek- DOPE.
Rayz- I like it, maybe make the bottom of the "A" longer and the one bar on the "Y" longer.
Eskimo-Nice.

Oil pastel freestyle.




marker freestyle








Crits please.

 

justin-kayse- you might want to stick to straight letters and rock some good simples, just pencil and paper.
eskimo2- ridiculous.
blunttokes- bottom is pretty good, i'm not feeling the top one.
rayz- straight letters are good, work on evening up the the curve on the R.

 

MaNtS Said to Viruz:


Of course back to the structure, so the piece says I O R Z, ill mspaint it in for you, did you struggle to read it?


I say....

You know what kid....Im going to leave it at this....If your that good then battle me. But know this if you cant take Crits then dont ask for them cause there are ppl on this site who are WAYY HARDER THAN ME. (Mass Appeal for Example) But to let you know that lil essay was just a long way of justifying how much you "Dont" know what you are doin. Soo start off Simple and work your way up. Im sayin Break down your letters. ight peace

 

did this in class today.