Tonight's work... [Broken External Image]:http://fc32.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/f/9/Typical_Cats_by_Rhino_fish.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://fc74.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/8/b/Rainbow_Six_by_Rhino_fish.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://fc90.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/034/a/c/Gravity_by_Rhino_fish.jpg Seyo- it's even doper when it's colored. Great job man. You may want a new black marker though. Crits (Below me) Fakt- I'm liking the top but the bottom one isn't very good. Try bending the bars. Meds- Looking pretty dope. I love the flow.
[Broken External Image]:http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/6633/p2032691zx2.jpg here are two new ones i did today with the bottom one i tryed to do somethin a little differnt dunno how i feel bout it tho seyo-badass i hella like the fill
fakt, make your letters a bit closer, and fix your shadow quick pen and highlighter from school today
ESKIMO: ive always dug your shit but i think i agree with zase some thicker outlines would be better maybe not i unno also you got a random ass bar comin off the left side of some of your A's
he uses it to cover dead space (peep the v in gravity) kinda a bad way to do it could just bring out the bar on the R a little more
wing- dig the piece the only thing i dont like is the crosses on the bottom of the S and the E and i know you know.. but that 0 needs to be bumped up in size.. Eskimo- dope.. id make the T in the first piece bigger.. and add 3d to the second piece.. it really adds to the other two pieces.. Fakt- lookin better every day.. kill the negative space between the k and t.. t's can be hard to work with.. but thats the one problem i have with those peices.. good start.. Meds- good bars.. id just work on the proportions a bit.. make all them letters the same size.. that can be tough with an m or a w in your name.. but keep it up.. one new sketch.. and one that got no crits yesterday except " practice more" from someone who seemed more toy than me.. View attachment 448661 View attachment 448662 crits.?
gizzurd, your first thing is dope eskimo. your lines a bit shake, and i am not really likeing the style too much. maybe if the bars were a bit thinner and taller. snew. work on balance of a letter and balance as a whole and you need to learn how to control positive and negitive space with your letters. and your n really buggs me and so does your w wings, the pink line is a really big distraction from your letters. i would of used it as an outline. not for the letters but for the piece. na mean? anyways. looking legit with the add ons and such. just need a little more practice. hates, your VDsomething, you v is really hard to pick out, your d doesn't really look like a d possibly because of the backwards ness. BS pohoe, monster is a cool cat. but his hand steeze isnt too great. Monster, a bit wild for me man.
[Broken External Image]:http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3981/sketchix0.jpg no excuses, just sketchin. ( i hate how everyone has an excuse as to why there stuff is wack, man up. )
who could it beee?(who could it be!) with that m double a b(with that m double a b!!) an we sho nuff gone shiiine(we sho nuff gone shiiine!) makin everybody lose they miiind(everybody losin they miind!)...i enjoy singing guys,just wanted you to know that guys.hey guys i enjoy singing..also i need to wash these pants,their just a mess guys. commentarys or crits or anything for me idc.whatever.i really need to get to school but i think im gonna play video games guys.also shade.thats whoreible like gizr said.any excuse? no? oh......well ok then.
View attachment 448707 final bump cause i'm a lazy bitch and cba to sketch tonight seyo-i like the letters but the arrows are a bit weirdand random hate-dope simple 519-you SHOULD have an excuse for that.....thats is fucking uuuggg-lleeeeeee
the m on the left...dont do it.for a throw i mean.idk why it just doesnt seem like throw material you know? probably not but yeah,not rocking.the simp is straight tho.but the a seems a lil too fat on the middle bar.
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lol both of you need to stfu and practice.your both wack,so stop bickering and idk....sketch? no beef with you two...thats just my 2 cents.
well i can do better than his shit.....idk how to even battle on here but how about it 519? EDIT: hate your not exactly much better....i was saying to him cause i hate it when people act bigger than they are.....