Sicko.Westcoast - stat doing the simples good before trying to do things like the wildstyle kinda ones you got. They don't look right at all. Allthought the charcs are ok. The brown and yellow one is the best, i like the Si but then it goes a bit down hill. try to get the same flow going through all your letters and not end up with a k that looks like it has downs syndrome .

Masta.T- good stuff.

respERATION- was hopeing nobody would notice the spelling mistake haha

 

Haha Yeah I admit that one looks pretty BUNK!

But what do you mean by the wildstyle ones don't look right at all? Would you add something to it or would you take something away from it?

I really appreciate the critique.

 

yo germ_7
get your own character and own style man.

 

thought i would post a sticker.
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I'd start by taking some of the stuff away. Like on the bottom one. i like the s but then you have a wierd thing that goes across the i. And your letters lack flow , i think youve just gone to complicated to fast. Just try to do simpler pieces well than pieces that are to complicated for you level. I hope you get what im saying. Im no pro in this area hell im no good at wildstyles yet but im just passing on my thoughts . Hope it helps.

 

This shit is tight, i love your concept, i just see you running into problems with bridges... just work on it a bit and it will be awesome bro.

 

Thanks man, yeah I'll work on that. I wanted to make this one about 6 feet tall, but I'll have to find a way to divide that up over two sheets of paper. I'll post the finish one later.

 

first collabo with my homie serkit

anyone else think the little "vs" sht in the middle looks like ew?

 

actually ....i like it.....drop a VS. one in our pack?

 

dope what kind of markers do you use?

 

resp-i dont do setup,people send em to me
shaolin-elmers painties,decos,other generic paint markers

close up!
i think it looks better close up haha

throy collab with serkit

 

Shits lookin sicc smooth

 

Trades up, this is Resps pack:
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1 cloud mini-poster
4 handie slaps
20 size-varied slap paper
10 medium sized diamonds
3 large size diamonds
3 angel slaps
2 retard om nom nom nomers slaps
and a handfull of small diamonds

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Enveloped motherfuckers
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Paper up for grabs.

 

Pack from Aekersaw
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i've critted all y'all so many times it's always the same...this is a good page. there you go!
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im down for exchanges but i have no idea how...so pm it up!

 

i want the one on the right to die,and the one on the left has a horrible color skeme :/

 

i still think it looks to much like stinkfists sf throies :/


i want the one on the right to die,and i think the left one has a 'tarded color skeme

 

did this today, just playing around.

 

^you inspired me. thank you...stencil i forgot i had from my griptape art before i even started writing.
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