cyto please dont argue with smooth. i did a couple months back and it didnt get me anywhere. just chill out and work on simples. youl get it eventually. progression comes naturally.
cyto: quit crying an do your simps sike: the I is weaak an you have a lot of unnecessary addons an the colouring is real busy but i guess its alright resp: work on your hands yea its hard but jus keep workin at em seyo: looks good
Man, Your "Fucking retarded" Don;t come on here, post some shit, Then get critz, And BITCH about them. Like, thats just a chumpy thing to do man.
Bump cause its fresh to def. Cyto - Can you honestly tell me you think your letters arent toy and have absolutely no room for improvement? Go back to simples for awhile man. Jael - Looks pretty solid man. Condoms - Diggin that N man. The R just looks obese though. Just messin around.
No room for improvment??! wtf I never said that, I came on here because I wanted advice or comments on how to improve the letters, not to have people come and tell me to start over with simples... I wanted to know what sort of kinks and changes in the letters were needed. People could ms paint my peice and circle areas that need fixing or entire letters that need to be changed. I apologise to people that deserve to be apologised to but people that are just as toy as I am telling me to go back to simples can fuck themselves. I am not trying to start a flamewar, does that make sense to you moderators?
The "Kinks" in the letters are exactly what you dont need. And the changes in the letters that are needed, are to be simpler. Were not just tryin to start shit either. You lack basic letter form. The only way to gain that is by doing simplessssssssss. We cant tell you how to draw letters bro. Its up to you. Faizah - Does that read Mike? If so, I would try to define the M just a bit more. And the bottom kick of the K looks a weebit off. Other than that it looks good man.
I dont get why people will post up a whole page of crits and just not crit mine. You have every persons name there almost, but mine...? Also cyto shaddup please.. :/
What I dont get is why you would waste a post bitchin about not gettin crits, when theres at least 4 flicks on this page that you yourself did nothing about... The mantra is afterall...Crit to get crits.
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Yep it does. I'll work on the M and the K! A thing I would work on your sketch is the bottom "box" of the M, the right one, maybe push it a bit more in. Kinda like the A.
Nah man..My shit gets deleted outta there reall quick like. Besides its just a two letter sketch, not a prod or anything.
where the fuck you been alex? i havent seen you post in here inforever and a day! anyway,im really feeling that nev toss at the top of that page...