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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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  2. Queezy

    Queezy Elite Member

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    Any constructive criticism, I need opinions.
     
  3. DRAKE_RKZ

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  4. Scheme*119

    Scheme*119 Elite Member

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  5. TastySesamcrew

    TastySesamcrew Senior Member

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    Dayda - Pretty nice style man especially the second pic
    Libre - You + Clean = win
    Queezy - I think you should try to match up the style of your letters man. And give it some flow
    Drake - Go for simples, use bars. Or even better: get a nice handie down

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    Crits?
     
  6. seywhat

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  7. ~Star~

    ~Star~ Senior Member

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    dope characters tasty, bottom one is fuckin ill
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    Crits?
     
  8. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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  9. MsKo

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  10. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    something i did in class this morning.... trying something new
    crits?
    Star- do Simples... learn letter structure...
    Drake- You got the idea for throws... just gotta keep workin on it
     
  11. SBY

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  12. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Alrgiht Sir I got yo Crits.....

    In my Name the "A" and the "R" look a lil enlarged. They look big compared to the other letters. Same with your Satro pic. Also you A and R look VERY Similar. Soo work on changin those bars.

    Also I think you need to work on your Thick and thin lines, It make your pieces look better and give them a better 3-d affect.
     
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  13. urmomsayshi

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    rayz- they wud be nice but i think u ruined them by adding the waves
    seyar- looks good in terms of structure except for the y, i had a hard time telling wut it was
    mango- the second one is ill
    u r very good at doing something sloppy and still making it look dope
    trying out a new stylesince lasat night
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  14. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    yeah i noticed the r and the a similaraties too, thanks for the ill proper critt, btw a flashy fill how to is in the making i already recorded everything i just gotta edit it now and upload on youtube, i donno when that will be though caue my boy is on the way over here with some snacks...
     
  15. urmomsayshi

    urmomsayshi Senior Member

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    MsKo- yea mang its nice to see some polaks on here lol
    my polish is a lil rusty
    it says happy birthday but what after that?
     
  16. SONE.

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  17. braxtons a g

    braxtons a g Senior Member

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    trying out more names. im really not feeling this one. crits?
    sone- i like the first one the most
     
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  18. .HATESONE.

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    like em all dude.that donald is kinda funky though.
     
  19. remos

    remos Senior Member

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    sone- first two are sick, the rest are pretty good too
    baker- lose the bubbles and make your bars the same size
     
  20. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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    I made that one last night, what do you think?

    Please I really need some tips

    Oh, yea, it says "Game". I really havent officially picked a name.
     
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