@Zase: I pretty much digg letter structure. IMO just get rid off some arrows...what i dont like are collors... but keep it up!
thnx people yeah colours suck hehe the taggie is fine its just weird placed i do 1 liners but doing real small taggies is just hard for me haha i lose my patient when doing big pieces so i rush things i really gotta stop doing that
His tag is nice imo Libre looks doooope I always like your shit cus it looks like my attempts Just cause I aint got the time nor patience to sit there and make a clean ass piece Oh and thanks m+s hah I been working day and night trying to get that throwie good But thanks for the crit other guy at least I know I'm getting somehwere Edit. Oh and wings that's the best shit I seen from you on here But your tag needs work
I think it would of looked better without the 3 arrows on both sides. And it would of looked better with a similiar color scheme, just darker colors for it And no red outline. But otherwise I love the structure of the Z and E. Anyways new crew I got into ! There pretty big around here so im pretty happy. View attachment 452985
got bored and sketched some chickens playin basketsandballs dont pay atention to the cok in the top.its not finished.quick lil sketch i gave up on haha. no crits,dont want em.none from me becuase im toooooo lazy but i will say zase is looking good.
Zase that shit is fire! Light blue outlines kinda unneccessary and i dunno about the 3d effect either, but you got the letterforms and shit down, your goin to the big boys soon I think man. Librelikespie, I dunno man, looks kinda wobbly. straighten it up man, your handstyle is pretty fuckin sick though, props. Ghozt, sick as fuck throw man, I think it should be in the bigboyz thread but thats probly only cos I love that style. The piece isnt as good, it starts out spaced out then ends all crushed up and shit, I know what your tryin man but its just a little too crazy. Again, sick handsteez. I'll post up some shit inna couple of days...
thnx man all i got to say now is the structure of that K hits real hard hatesone ... for real thats sick i love it use it in a piece with simmulair bars
Zase - hot shit bro Ghozt - feelin tht throw New thing i did it's kinda like keep six style but it koo li think critz? [Broken External Image]:http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1259/012ij7.th.jpg
My bad. Yours is best described by the face I overlooked it. Its decent, on the right tracks but not quite there yet. Drop the dots, full stops, periods whatever they are between the letters. Not needed and dont really add anything homie. For you its just keep sketching man, your at the stage you almost got simples down, just keep doing them, stay simple man, your letters are just letters though if ya feel me. They're not really feeling like a piece, bring them a bit closer, maybe thicken up your bars a bit to create less space, but keep everything in proportion and shit. So yeah just keep at it mayn. Handstyle needs work but just when you have a minute in school/work/ when your on the phone/ some other shit, just pick up a pen and doodle some handy's. Practice makes better homie. That enough?
not finished..also its lopsided for some reason.i think it was when i put it in the scanner. so yeah. crits? any any? or comments i dont care. SIRE(sore?) like it it has teh potential.you cant really go wrong with a old english font really. KAREK like the writes.definitely.but idk about the throw.its cool but idk it feels weird i guess.either way keep it goin.
Hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot... hot. especially that throw That coka is good just make sure everything hits the bottom of the paper like the a at the end YOu might have to make your c a bit taller Either that or it could be the way the paper is slanted, who knows.
are you fucking serious?? you say that kids throw and 'piece' is hot. but you give bad feed back to hates?? WOW
ok need some help. been playing around for a while...this is the only semi decent stuff for the past 2 months. i think its in order of when i started with the first sketch [Broken External Image]:http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8673/graffhc3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8184/copyofgdepm3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7855/graff004zz2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8358/copyofgraff004rd8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8486/graff003ip0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9835/graff002sa4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7144/graff006aw7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1011/graff009ut7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7654/copyofgraff005cv3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9959/85104548fj0.jpg