Be sure to space all the letters evenly. And definitely ditch the arrows.

 

so a lil more space between the letters?
an and will do fresh flix in a few nights

 

Not necessarily MORE space, just be sure it's even.

 

Which one/ones should I use?
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1st pic-second one, next from last one.

 

4th one

 

dont write kasm, theres another one, he burns you, and hes on this site.

 

crits

 

Haven't been on this site in months, crits please, I've improved alot, don't even know if anyone will remember my username

Azule- it looks as though you're spending too much time drawing the tag, instead of just writing it and letting it flow. try some simps, and post them
Fat4l- let your letters breath a little, some of the letters seem a bit crammed together
Thatguywhodrinkstea- I think I remembr your username from way back, correct me if I'm wrong but I think you were the one who wrote oene. Anyway, that posek looks clean as fuck. get more flicks and post!

 

The R is too slanted, straighten out the first leg of the R and it will look a lot nicer.

 

resk...too many add ons

scheme i like

sloppy tag
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oct P?

i cant make that out that well im not gunna lie :/

but hey, like you said, sloppy

 

I know the first resk tag has way too much shit, I was just trying to experiment with add ons. My normal tag doesn't have any add ons

 

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I don't know if these are simple enough.. but whatever crits please

 

Either the very last one or the second one.

 

just started and what to know what you think

feel free to hate...

 

WATSR- really really tone it down, you don't need all the extras. You're no king, so remove the crown, although it's fun to add crap like that, that's doesn't come til later. I do like the simplicity of the WA and the oneline flow of it. but the rest, tone it down

AZULE- I like the last one best. try writing them a bit faster now. give them some flow



bottom page bump for crits
ignore the shitty add ons, I'm trying to figure add ons out

 

another way home from my new crib...
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yeh erm
if im not mistaken thats a crown on the last one. practise what u preach.

and error
the second one is nice
but loose the halo.