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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. ANDRO

    ANDRO Member

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    this electrical box was covered by other writers until about a month ago it got buffed.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6324/dsc0369.jpg

    im trying to do a handstyle that flows nicely, and is simple. all theses were done while wasted lol. and i know im a toy, thats why im in the toy forum..
     
  2. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    the big orange one is nice , keep it.
     
  3. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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  4. Scheme*119

    Scheme*119 Elite Member

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    why do you post those if you dont take crits?
     
  5. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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    i have taken crits? :( any ideas what i can do with the mother fucking R and P?
     
  6. .HATESONE.

    .HATESONE. Banned

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    you should just scrap the whole thing and go back to the drawing board.thats my opinion...
     
  7. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    i keep my P's and R's simple . like the whole tag :D
     
  8. shayk

    shayk Senior Member

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    ai130.photobucket.com_albums_p270_jonnyblaze12123_IMG00162.jpg

    new name.... i think
     
  9. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    Resp- Is the second one done in crayon or a mean streak? Either way did you guys hit a bump or something lol, just scrap the whole style.
     
  10. denaaa

    denaaa Senior Member

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    respp- its a little to messy butt i could see what your trying to do
    shayk-take of those lines and stars and make the d more the shape of the tag and it could look good

    critt my shit plz dont look at that throwiiee its maddd uglyy
    ai232.photobucket.com_albums_ee58_all_apolegies_dethrowiii.jpg
    ai232.photobucket.com_albums_ee58_all_apolegies_denastag.jpg
    ai232.photobucket.com_albums_ee58_all_apolegies_denasscrewhandstyllee.jpg
     
  11. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    ^^ looks nice keep it up.
     
  12. expozay

    expozay Senior Member

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  13. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    don't underline the handstyle with a letter, dude
     
  14. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    expozay loose the turd hangin off the o, or shorten it up, and I agree with BigBlueViolence

    Any crits for my stuff up top?
     
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  15. denaaa

    denaaa Senior Member

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    yaa expoz take alll the crap away from the tagg like the " markss and whatever and dont underline with the e lol it should look a little better after that andd any critss for my stufff upp topppp
     
  16. expozay

    expozay Senior Member

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    dena shit looks real good dude.
     
  17. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    ***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #2***
    Word: Whatever you write.
    Deadline: Friday, March 6, 2009 (10PM AST)
    Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic) with whatever you write as the subject.
    PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

    lets try and get more entries that last week, all you have to do is send me a handstyle of what you write, thats it.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKHandstyle5.jpg

    expo - make it simpler, round it out so its not so jagged

    denas - nice stuff, i dont like how you connected your e to your n in the first one, looks fresh overall though

    dramun - lose the stars and shit

    resp - i agree 100% with what scheme said, everything you post looks exactly the same because you dont bother to listen to what people have to say. looks shaky as hell, you have to wait until the bus stops as someone said earlier haha.. the only one that looks good in my opinion is the third one from the bottom

    andro - looks pretty good, some people might mistake it for AMRO

    skayk/lbc - make all the letters the same size and lose all the wack extra stuff

    etek - its looking a lot better, i still think you should stick to paper for a little longer, and id consider changing your name if i were you, not a great word and the letters are pretty bad

    tepar - looks good, nice spots.. keep all your letters the same size

    scrap - looks good other than your P. loose the thing inside of it and dont make the loop of your P so big

    conz - like i said for expo, dont make your letters so jagged, keep your letters the same size, fill up pages full of tags and stick to paper for now, it will come

    queezy - its decent, make the bottom part of your E's rounded like the top part

    yoir - try an uppercase Y

    somebody give me some crits
     
  18. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    DENA... fix your n in your tag, I know N's are hard to flow, but I like the lowercase one you did, just not the uppercase one. For me, it's too hard to mistake for another letter. because you space it out a bit more than any of your other letters.
    Your B's or R's(I hope that's a B)... could be mistaken for the other. Don't get to crazy with your over steezing your handstyle, especially where it doesn't need steezing, because you have a good handy :p

    SANEK
    Try making your k in a different way. with a straight bar, or make the extension(if you want it to go out like that) curl or something. Because a straight arched line like that doesn't look so hot. Little bit of dead space... try doing nonstops.. than go back to your normal tag, and see if you have less dead space, or try not picking up the pen far from the paper, as to try to keep the letters closer.
     
  19. BigBlueViolence

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    ai44.tinypic.com_2emcryd.jpg

    done for the last battle.

    Sanek- your shit is straight, but, personally, I'd try to keep progressing.
    It's too plain for me.
     
  20. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    oi, true. I think you should add some FLAVA.
    I like simple handies but when most people say that... they mean, simple letters, with nice flow ;]
    You have to find a right balance.