seyar. connect the top of the R. cuz it looks like a K. i like that Y. dumpin, i dont like the P or G. they dont flow as well as the rest of the letters. try an bring the bottom of the P lower an the hook in the G higher.
nice simp dumping real clean resp- sry i cant find any kind of letter structure there. its got mad potential but its dirty
00Made - That dumping simple is fresh! Keep it up. Lyon - Is that a crew name? Because I highly suggest not writing Sin. Don't forget your 3d or drop shadow. Resp - Its not terrible, but I am really not digging it.
just the outline, wanted to know if i had to fix anything before i colored it in and put 3D any stuff. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/8339/img1929p.th.jpg Dumping-fresh, clean. Seyar-connect the top of the A and the R. dope S and Y though. Resp-make it a little more simpler.
[Broken External Image]:http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/8446/dsc0115u.jpg crit this shit! trying to keep it simple. and i know my d looks too much like an o
Ouch. Okay, guess I saw that coming, I asked for crits, you gave me crits, I can't bitch about that. Thanks. Anyone else have crits? Lyson: I would either do them all pointy or all round, not a combination Resp: I understand you not wanting to stick with simples, as you can see from the rst of my post above this, I've got the same problem, but I don't really feel all the jagged points on yours. Seywhat: the simple letters look decent to me, I'd like to see it with a real clean fill, since you said your markers died. Dumping, Nice simples, especially like the D Mone: I like the top one, not as much on the cursive one below ANDRO: I like it, interesting fill, but you're right, the D doe slook a bit like an O
bars r kewl [Broken External Image]:http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0315092029.jpg?t=1237164367 first attempt at bars critssss
zase-like the colors anyways some boredom simples http://s58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/?action=view¤t=100_0993.jpg View attachment 459750 View attachment 459751
[Broken External Image]:http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/8016/p3153039.jpg AEK i know simples and whatnot but i was bored and just started going i know its bad but still crits if anything decent about it? sike- im diggin those especially the top one if only it woulda been on some clean paper but still they are all pretty clean sass- just do seperate letters dont try and combine them with any extensions just do keyboard letters kaiser- ya agree with some of the shit above just try and spread them out no extensions and straight up and down haha so pretty much just simples man.
KnoxIn, dont ever EVER EVER do that ever again, SHAME ON YOU. simples PLEASE!. Your bars are uneven, WAAAAY TOO POINTY, it has no flow, you cant even see the letters infact i didnt even KNOW those were letters untill you said it says AEK. The letter structure is just straight up whack/toy/stupid/retarded/dumb. Never again... Never again... Basiclu, what im trying to say is that... IT FUCKING SUCKS DICK
haha well thanks for the crits people and believe me i do know they are horrible and all that. i normally do do simples but i was bored
sike i like that k...[Broken External Image]:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/5715/screencapture14mo2.png not callin a bite, just pointing out a similarity
ok this obviously dont compare to most of the throws on here but crits would be appreciated View attachment 459835
dont do faces in your letters when you cant even do proper letters yet. leep al the letters the same size