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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. what4joke...

    what4joke... Senior Member

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    i write kake get over it
     
  2. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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  3. Geraldo

    Geraldo Banned

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    seyar. connect the top of the R. cuz it looks like a K. i like that Y.

    dumpin, i dont like the P or G. they dont flow as well as the rest of the letters. try an bring the bottom of the P lower an the hook in the G higher.
     
  4. Sizzuurp

    Sizzuurp Senior Member

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    nice simp dumping real clean

    resp- sry i cant find any kind of letter structure there. its got mad potential but its dirty
     
  5. justin kayse

    justin kayse Member

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    I was seriously just about to ask that question
     
  6. Black Flag

    Black Flag Elite Member

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    00Made - That dumping simple is fresh! Keep it up.

    Lyon - Is that a crew name? Because I highly suggest not writing Sin. Don't forget your 3d or drop shadow.

    Resp - Its not terrible, but I am really not digging it.
     
  7. WHAT??

    WHAT?? Member

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  8. graffdabusup

    graffdabusup Senior Member

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  9. ANDRO

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  10. Kaiser71

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    Ouch. Okay, guess I saw that coming, I asked for crits, you gave me crits, I can't bitch about that. Thanks. Anyone else have crits?

    Lyson: I would either do them all pointy or all round, not a combination

    Resp: I understand you not wanting to stick with simples, as you can see from the rst of my post above this, I've got the same problem, but I don't really feel all the jagged points on yours.

    Seywhat: the simple letters look decent to me, I'd like to see it with a real clean fill, since you said your markers died.

    Dumping, Nice simples, especially like the D

    Mone: I like the top one, not as much on the cursive one below

    ANDRO: I like it, interesting fill, but you're right, the D doe slook a bit like an O
     
  11. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    this is what happens when i dont feel like sketching
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    so why am i ? i dont know kill me
     
  12. `SassAsaurus_ReXX`

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  13. sike_21

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  14. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/8016/p3153039.jpg

    AEK

    i know simples and whatnot but i was bored and just started going i know its bad but still crits if anything decent about it?

    sike- im diggin those especially the top one if only it woulda been on some clean paper but still they are all pretty clean
    sass- just do seperate letters dont try and combine them with any extensions just do keyboard letters
    kaiser- ya agree with some of the shit above just try and spread them out no extensions and straight up and down haha so pretty much just simples man.
     
  15. mmmburgers

    mmmburgers Elite Member

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    KnoxIn, dont ever EVER EVER do that ever again, SHAME ON YOU. simples PLEASE!. Your bars are uneven, WAAAAY TOO POINTY, it has no flow, you cant even see the letters infact i didnt even KNOW those were letters untill you said it says AEK. The letter structure is just straight up whack/toy/stupid/retarded/dumb. Never again... Never again... Basiclu, what im trying to say is that... IT FUCKING SUCKS DICK
     
  16. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    haha well thanks for the crits people and believe me i do know they are horrible and all that. i normally do do simples but i was bored
     
  17. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    sike im loving that throwy, id love it even more on a wall
     
  18. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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  19. Neg_INFLUENZ

    Neg_INFLUENZ Guest

    ok this obviously dont compare to most of the throws on here but crits would be appreciated

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  20. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    dont do faces in your letters when you cant even do proper letters yet. leep al the letters the same size