^^^^My Freind did that and he wantted me to post it up for him and get some Crits. [Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0005.jpg ^^^^Simpliar Style Im workin on. Im going to go with Str8 out bar from now On. I like it anyway theirs soo much you can do with them. But I like the R to the Left more than the one on the Right.
sosvirus - thats a better style, and remember when you put your letters together to try and make them the same height for now, as well as making the bars the same/similar width.(start with the middle horizontal bar on those r's you started.)
Yeah virus that R on the left is kickin'. word of advice though, you're cutting the 3D real short/shallow inside the R there, just don't worry about showing the end of the 3D on it, just make it show on you're 3D fill, know what im trying to say?
Yea thanks ppl Im stickin to these Gernetic Bars baw instread of the Organic type shit I was amin for. Plus You be able to do more. . I'll have more sketches tomarrow GUYs
[Broken External Image]:http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1723/scan0003dte.jpg crits? yo virus, that r on the left is boom
virus - your mate should get rid of the dotted lines showing the bars inside the letters, i think it makes it look scrappy... i mean i know a few people have been doing it but i dont like it at all. Your R's are definatley getting more style, im just not feeling the spine on the right though, it looks goofy with such a hard bend and i think when the spine bends that way it kills the flow, also not feeling the little bars you have that connect the loop and the leg, maybe just stick to one bar or fatten them up View attachment 460418 View attachment 460419 View attachment 460420
^ try to make your R like it wont hide your E. some freestyles: [Broken External Image]:http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9733/picture39n.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/1633/picture46e.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/912/picture33i.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2307/photo0002n.jpg Straight up pen [Broken External Image]:http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5885/nicepaint.jpg
WINGS lose the two different colors, that are really really dark. and the green 3d. lose all that. and do a pen sketch, because I've seen your letters, they're not that bad, but you killed that piece with all that shit. and not in the good way.