Bane- run with '3' and '4'

 

do u see how hyphy is using bars to make his letters. do that use bars, it looks sloppy and disproportioned when u freehand it

 

ok, ill try that, thanks

 

quick sketch dealio before work. I just sat down and started but it looks like trash. I can't get any flow, any inspiration. (I know to go simple, I just did this real quick for shits. Letter size and spacing weren't taken into account, just trying to get something, anything.)

View attachment 461026

 

I used to write a long time ago, I just started up again yesterday. Here are my first two simples, "stars" was yesterday afternoon, and the "laced" one was from this morning at about 3AM [before I went to bed]. My name is "Star".

Critique please

This is very simple, the first one I've done in years! I was choosing between "star" and "stars", this was before I decided. Haha don't give me crap about the arrow, please.


I own a clothing label called "Laced Clothing", this is my second tag in years, I just wanted something that looked psychedelic.


I'll post more as they come

 

14 25-yo pretty gnarley style man..work on the color selection.
and PROVIN-yo nice work keep getin ur style down tho..pretty nice dude.

and this is what i did durin school lol..ive been gettin back into it again so..crits?
it sais bomb

 

eh...

 

Rayz, its nice but I wouldn't have put those lines that go into the Y or the Z.

 

Bump...

 

bump..

 

Project Link - DOPE. That shit is fucking flawless IMO.

Update #4. I'm about to ink it right now. Any tips on inking? 3D or drop shadow?

[Broken External Image]:http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5741/progressg.png

 

Drop shadow!

 

[Broken External Image]:http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0092.jpg

crits??
reach-- that shits nice man catchin on fasttt
project---i like it
stussy-- i would work on that z i honestly only like the A

btw did this shit in 2 period ha math gets boring

 

[Broken External Image]:http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6235/cimg1958y.jpg
i was told to go simple so this is what i got...i think its pretty bad
im thinking about taking out the 3rd T cause its awkward

crits??

 

Jzek-less shakey lines, try to make it one solid line
Reach-wow shit, getting a lot better man..
Rayz-straight fucking fire
Bomb-thats pretty damn sick, keep it up

new junk..

 

bane take that fucking line out inbetween the two bumps in the B

just some random shit, the purple and yellow one sucks ass i was just fuckin round, and the grab isnt a bite or anything just went with the hand,sorryfor the last one should a flipped it

 

BUMPPP

+ more from today

first of the day, not very good at all.


second of the day, first colored one in a long time.


simple throwie


Crits please! I don't want to bump it again

 

you can go to the intermeditate thread

edit- to Noisyburgalar

 

theres such thing?