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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. graffdabusup

    graffdabusup Senior Member

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  2. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    I don't dig the limp dick looking things all over the place.
    The E is goofy too, man
     
  3. graffdabusup

    graffdabusup Senior Member

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    thanks for the honesty =P
     
  4. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    that M without those things would be dope, though.
    Just a flat bar across the top.
     
  5. denaaa

    denaaa Senior Member

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    mone-i like your simplee nott your throwiee soo much thoughh
    bigbluee-i like your a and r butt your e needs work
    crits??
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  6. bulltimeJAMP

    bulltimeJAMP Senior Member

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    ok thats an alright two letter but i suggest that you makeyour full word with that, and to make it look good youll have to make the middle prong on the e smaller.
     
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  7. Zarb

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  8. -Dank-DK-

    -Dank-DK- Elite Member

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  9. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    this can really be something, just keep practcing your lines are too shaky
     
  10. Sizzuurp

    Sizzuurp Senior Member

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    ur gettin much better zarb keep at it. i like the period better than the o. ur L needs some tweakin along with the rest of ur letters, but keep at it/

    i really like that DE its lookin raw as hell. but yea your lines could be smoother.
     
  11. EST2007

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  12. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    i dont mean to shit on you, but it looks like ur trying too hard to emulate cliche bubble bottomed letters. the S needs to lose the hard angled tumor, since your letters are really rounded it downst flow. the K also needs a lot of work and it too needs to lose the tumor.
     
  13. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    def has potential, R is mad weak tho
     
  14. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    i like ur throw but i hate that E, and it seems like everyone uses it. dont make the bobble on the N so big, it draws attention from the other letters. i'd make it the same size as the S's bottom bubble if that makes sense
     
  15. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    imo simples like this i dont consider throws. too many corners and angles. you should be able to bust out a throw just like BAM

    but for what it's worth, ur letters have good structure. clean simple bars
     
  16. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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  18. shayk

    shayk Senior Member

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    you shuld probly put your paint on lock "JA"

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  19. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    your retarded that is ja on the pics
     
  20. Juicee

    Juicee Senior Member

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    i lol'd hahahahahahha

    also shayk, your flow is pretty bad; it looks like you took an hour to do that lol..
    imo you should work on making your letters less blocky and makin it flow right