mone-i like your simplee nott your throwiee soo much thoughh bigbluee-i like your a and r butt your e needs work crits??
ok thats an alright two letter but i suggest that you makeyour full word with that, and to make it look good youll have to make the middle prong on the e smaller.
I dropped the O and put a period there instead [Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0322092116.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0322092117.jpg Sone- That 2nd one if fire Queezy- I have no complaints, i like it Mone- Your simples good but do what big blue said about your throw Big Blue- ya every thing except the E looks nice DE- I like your 2 letter alot also, now maybe try working on your full name
ur gettin much better zarb keep at it. i like the period better than the o. ur L needs some tweakin along with the rest of ur letters, but keep at it/ i really like that DE its lookin raw as hell. but yea your lines could be smoother.
still workin on my throw, ehhhhh still needs work [Broken External Image]:http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/SP_A0804.jpg
i dont mean to shit on you, but it looks like ur trying too hard to emulate cliche bubble bottomed letters. the S needs to lose the hard angled tumor, since your letters are really rounded it downst flow. the K also needs a lot of work and it too needs to lose the tumor.
i like ur throw but i hate that E, and it seems like everyone uses it. dont make the bobble on the N so big, it draws attention from the other letters. i'd make it the same size as the S's bottom bubble if that makes sense
imo simples like this i dont consider throws. too many corners and angles. you should be able to bust out a throw just like BAM but for what it's worth, ur letters have good structure. clean simple bars
love it.... BUT i dont like how the cut into the N is so deep, and on the N the bottom is pointy, but none of the letters are like that, fucks with the flow
i lol'd hahahahahahha also shayk, your flow is pretty bad; it looks like you took an hour to do that lol.. imo you should work on making your letters less blocky and makin it flow right