frigidy fresh, but i think the bottom of the e should be more rounded. like the bottom of it should come up and connect with the r. don't know if that made sense. just my .02 *directed at hoer*
your S is really awesome but the rest of it, no offense, kinda sucks. make the letters proportional, like your S. dont do that reaching out thing with the V. And the bar on the bottom of the T would look better if it wasn't on your piece.
rekn- i dont like the extension coming out the bottom of the e but other than that its good and u look to have decent can control maybe juss cut some of ur black lines to make em shart instead of dull
morek and rays your stuff is dope fran yours is coming along but it looks a little shakey keep working at it
downunder - id stay with the same colour fill other than that i like it. Vest - i would continue the outline on that one part of the "s" near the bottom, looks like its getting lost in the fill. Ran out of one colour and the teal blue wasn't coming on right as you can see. sorry if this filesize is madhuge: Crits!!
die hippy right on i hate hippies or the ones that try to push theyr happyness onto u and the ones that live in their own fantasy up in their head...i jus wana crack em and make em snap to reality...sorry for the rant