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ok people give some damn crits thats what this is for when you post a picture atleast crit some shit damn
yortseD.eht.hturT.'s- I really like the texture of your letter's. Dacks-The S looks abit weird in the throw. Seek139- I'm a new writer but it looks really good to me. I havent drawn in a while and I'm starting to draw with bars. Crits would be appreceated.
I think i posted this before. Crits please. weak fingers - looks pretty good not feelin the wutang looking w though. skin - letters should be the same height and work on shadow they are off knoxin - lose extension on a that covers the z and something dont look right with the overlapping? other than that its tight. yortseD - i dont get your letter structure and all the added shit (extensions, cracks, etc.) way too busy, too much goin on.
stutter: wow what...haha; work on everything man. plus you spelled stutter wrong? i know you messed up on the 'r' but stutter has 3 't's in the word lol.. neaz: shitt is dopee. especially diggin' the lower case. the upper case 'n' and 'e' is kind of weird thoughh faze: not feelin' the 'e' and the red force field. the 'e' looks kind of sloppy and is bein covered too much by the 'z'. yortseD.eht.hturT.: all i gotta say is start with simples bro Skin1016: i dont really like how your throwups are goin from smaller to bigger. try to maintain the size throughout the whole throw. as for the simple, on the 'a', dont make the top of it round. Seek139: shit is madd fireee. if that first letter is an 'h' though, dont make the 2 bars jut out on opposite ends. weakfingers: the wutang 'w' looks soo out of place. it looks like you're trying to do simples (somewhat?) and that's good. try using bars in your ishh to make it more structured tbonebailey2711: sorry but shit is fruity lol. looks like somethin that would be on a candy wrapper lol.. i wanna see you write your name. work on your structure tbonebailey2711: uhh, you colored it nice? shit looks fruity as hell too, im sorry. work on your structure crits? i just crit practically this whole page lol..
juicee, ur S has potential to be slick as fuck, and ur other letters are lookin pretty fly too. I would jut think of making the structure more fluid, which would make it stronger. I like ur idea for the drips, but sometimes less is more yadida?
Aspek- i think if you have the legs of the a and k flare out instead of strait down it would look pretty fresh, i also think your e and s need some work reallytrustfulstangers- the charactor is pretty clean and you have a solid throw keep at it juicee- i like most of it exept for the top of the s and maybe try connecting the bars of the b
its a piece sketch i did for my blackbook...i didnt have it. im just switchin it up dude, not trying to rock the same outline....
background is a bit big aspek - looks good, maybe fix up that k mets - good fix that s Juice - cut back on the drips, that E is hot so bring it out a bit more, it's kinda hidden, the S looks good too stute, get rid of the squigles at the end of the s an on the T's Neaz - looking good Jers - shits hot yortseD - looks like ur tryin too hard dacks - ur simp. is good maybe fix up that A, your throwies need a bit of work seek - looks good skwint - keep workin on the simps tbone - props for fillin 2 pages, i'd never have the patience to do that, work on ur handstyle crits?
this is my first sketch ive ever been happy with (except for the e). crits please View attachment 468911