You could always make all the letters the same size That'll help out alot You wouldn't even have to change your letter style
phazer - the ink looks tight, nice drips on it the handy tho... some say iuts ok, but i reckon too much wild shit is comin out here and there, try go simpler.... romero's simple tag looks good
ok took everyones advice, i decided to change my name( dont tell me some legend writer writes this too) and take it simple. It says "Genesis" first ones with a highligher(excuse the smudging) and 2nd one with a sharpie. still gotta clean em up a bit and im gonna go rack a pilot or something tomorow
Its a Pen ink super concentrate with a PVC primer base and a few little secrets you cant tell from the flicks but its semi metallic too. It comes out like a black metallic.. its pretty sick. im excited it turned out so well. I may post up the whole recipe one day.
sufr: I wouldn't put a halo that's bigger than the actual tag herbn: I fucking love how your tag is so chaotic yet, readable. *saved in my graff folder*
Thanks Skull e, glad some people dig it. I like it though cause it is alittle crazy but its easily readable and memorable, doesnt look like every other simple NY or philly handstyle. And expo im thinking about it. Im about to make a second batch and if it works as well as the first then ill probly post it.
ok cleaned it up, got a better marker(bingo dabber ) skull e: its supposed to be the top of the I but yeah, think your first 2 would look better without all the messy drips.
Yarbles - That looks friggin' sweet. Sufr - Try to space out your letters a little bit. Been trying some simple stuff. [Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4614/img1409k.jpg
YARBLES-thatz dope, im jus tryna picture it w/out all the add ons haha crits por favor jus a new style im workin on, still in the erly stages, lemme kno watchu think
KASE2: The first one looks alright, though I don't like some of the horizontal extensions. The second is a little jumbled for my taste. Fobia: The horizontal line on the I makes it almost look like an L. Also, try tilting the A in the opposite direction to reduce dead space. Genesis: Try giving it just a tad more space. Trying out a new E. I think it matches the beginning of the tag a lot better, creating a bit of a frame as opposed to ending weakly in a different style. I'm working on sizing it down to match the other letters, now that I look at the pic here. Crits appreciated.
Yarbles: Thats Dope Fury: Try and get letters that flow together. Clean it up..and go simplier. Kase: I like the first one, the second one looks really messy..just like scrible. Vice: The new E looks good, but doesnt flow with the E. Lose all the dashes and underlines n shit.
Correct, try tilting the A to the left, almost mirroring the look of the F. It might give the whole thing some symmetry. The letters also need to flow together better. The O doesn't quite match the look of the other letters, try to keep them seeming as if they belong together.