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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Sufr - I like this more, but as you have already stated, change the N
     
  2. tru?

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  3. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    today...
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    quick ish, a car was coming
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    last couple days
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    messy can killer
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    dick move?
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    J's ugly on these ones
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    lsd tru? - go simpler, dont try to deform your letters, ie. just make a normal question mark, it would look a lot better, and give crits to get them

    genesis - not feeling the S's they look to much like 8's

    vice - i think it would look better with a lowercase E, handstyles are almost always look better with lowercase E's unless you can rock on of those crazy curly E's that everyone attempts at one point haha, and round out the bottom of your V

    hemp - not really feeling it, the letters are decent but there isnt really all that much flow to it, that bottom style could be dope though keep working on it

    fobia - keep all the letters the same size and round your letters out, dont make them so sharp

    rapist - that looks ill, i think you should drop the circle with the cross underneath it though, but keep the swirls coming off the R and T

    skull-e - the cust tags are growing on me, i like that kinda grimy style you got going for it, but your tazr tags are clean as hell. i like them both but for completely different reasons
     
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  4. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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  5. skull-e

    skull-e Elite Member

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    New style
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    My crew
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    Old ass TASRs
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  6. BigBlueViolence

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    This one is dope, not really digging the half arrow line on the H, but dope overall.

    But my dude, you have to get rid of that second one.
    Maybe it's just not my style, but I don't see any flow at all in it.
     
  7. white

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  8. skull-e

    skull-e Elite Member

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    white: I like #1 the best tbh. and close the gap under your throws
     
  9. KASE2

    KASE2 Senior Member

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    thnx eray1 bout the help on the second, but yea not really 2 much flow 2 it, started as an attempt at my own philly but as you can see...

    SUFR-yea id say put sum flavor on a lower case N and try usin that, and also leave one of the ends on ur S's open otherwise it looks more like an 8, overall its koo

    KLIC - there pretty cool, but i just dont like the whole one flow aspect and then breakin off 4 the K ya know. but thats just cuz im a dick haha, but overall its pretty good (K's are fuckin horrible 4 1 flows tho... and F's)

    VICE - im not trying to be a dick, but 2 me it's just ugly, im sorry, id say just use a few peices of paper practicing different ways for each letter. try looking at othere peoples tags and keep those in your mind while your desiging yours. dont bite em but keep them in mind and possibly peice three different ones into your own. jus keep preacticin.

    WHITE - im not feelin the small E's, add some flare on the lower leg of the K and try a short str8 line for the top leg, and dont tilt the V
     
  10. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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  11. KASE2

    KASE2 Senior Member

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    ^^^^ theres not really any flow, some letters are square and others r rounded, make them all uniform
     
  12. Bink1

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  13. tru?

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    Sufr- Really good mate seems to flow really well to me.

    Vice- Id change the v at the beginning but then again that might just be me?

    Kilc- Some really nice stuff going on there specially the hand style practice bit.

    White- I really like number 5 on that picture maybe try to make the e abit more like the other letters and not just left small on its own.
     
  14. tru?

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  15. Bink1

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    tru-try to do some keyboard letters.
     
  16. klic

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    i like that first one tep, i fixed your pack and sent it out today
     
  17. expozay

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    first time using a mop and ghetto krink. squeezin a little to hard. mad dripss.


    yea tep that first one is fresh.
    fobia no.
     
  18. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    emik - i think you should start rounding out your letters
     
  19. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Emik - No...what? Suggestions would be cool. I like your simpleness though, it looks clean.
    Teper - I really like that highway one, but the rest are cool too
     
  20. expozay

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    sry fury i was just in a weird mood when i wrote that.

    i wud suggest not mixing capitals and lowercase also dont make your A square like the one on the right. and get rid of the lines in your O.