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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Loose the arrows and your Stucture is poor. Work on that
     
  2. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    jupsick thanks man... shit looks good... i'll get you yours soon... just been way busy with finals :\
     
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  3. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    ReallTrustfulStrangers; Yeah. You write Mers don't you? I'll work on the structure. And yeah the arrows and most of the extensions are pretty fucked up. I'll get rid of them next time.
     
  4. Shink

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  5. peace89

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    shink... i hope your ready to get fuck't in the ass

    i know the i needs work and the first character need some work too

    crits please
     

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    hmm... cut off that thing at the bottom of the b or shorten it and the top of the a ame shorten but dont loose it and the k idk just not feelin it or the i...... just do those letter with out the extension just change the stucre.
     
  7. Shink

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    :(
     
  8. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    Stuss-
    ai39.tinypic.com_6s3ots.png

    That little change would make it look a lot better, IMO
     
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  9. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Peace is kinda right, but don't sweat it, everyone new here goes through it. Hit the new to graff thread and learn some bars. Seems like a step back at first, but in the end you'll thank yourself so much. On the first one, looks like you've already kinda got the idea of bars, so work on bar thickness, clean up some lines, and go simpler at first.
     
  10. Shink

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    sounds good.
     
  11. BigBlueViolence

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  12. skull-e

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    earn: that a in the throw is soooo fresh

    but try to make the bottom of your Rs and Ns pointy like the first letters, I ahve the same problem...it sucks

    just keep redoing it untill they line up properfully.
     
  13. joker954

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    and earn dont waste ur slaps with tags until u get decent
     
  14. BigBlueViolence

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    Haha, dude, my normal hand is good enough for me,
    and the one on the right was for the fuck of it.
     
  15. niner1234

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  16. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    trying something new out while sobering up. Crits?
    I know it's pretty messed up but whatever :eek:
     
  17. Erm...

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  18. jupsick

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    hebrew shit from israel
     
  19. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    fuck dude where were you when i asked for crits before i inked it haha...
    yea man i get ya...the Z would look better cut back a little

    + blue- im diggin the first handy
     
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  20. LIZARD

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    im liking the slime shit in the background...and i definitly agree about the Z would look better if the line was brought in more