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I'm fuckin no one so... what do I know, but people say crits for crits so heres the shiz, cause I just need to know what direction to push in Fobia - I'd say more simple, I hate using a pencil, pens and markers are just a different feel, imo tru - damn, simples... emik - I'd change the e, but thats just me, otherwise.. at my level i dont think i can crit this much earn - the first one is a no, the second is better. that first one, i see what you wanted to do, but... lame - i get it with the line, but I dont think it worked like you were hopin nukes - i like that, it's not bad, i dont think i can really crit this at my level past that error - or this, but i think this looks good idk... some of this is a little older. at this point i dont if i should just be looking at other styles to just get the movements or what. i just sit around and draw pages and pages of letters. i do differeent words all the time to get a well rounded alphabet. theres no other people here though so i just want some other perspective. [Broken External Image]:http://unitedalone.com/aq/fuck.jpg
yo, someone already writes faim...as seen in this video about around 2 minutes in http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgK2P2zl7xM
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mone-i like it. with ease-go simpler and get some flow going las-its ok.. but the drips are kind of shitty [Broken External Image]:http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/SDC10175-1.jpg
SOME NEW SHIT ---------------- CRITS ------ Basik: Don't squish your letters so much Oxi: You are improving very quickly Mone: Maybe add some dots near the end and make all the lines in your asteriks the same lenght
mone-lookin good oxi-pretty dope cust-lol.wtf is cust??? dope tho basik-go more basikererer. ] VDK...all fuckin day.
Thanks for the crit. I am not sure how to make it more simple though, like it would just looks like normal printing when I try to make it simpler. It does look good spaced out a bit more, thanks.