haha those were some hoer from russia. i think dude was trying to tell me to change my name or something. i would never paint like that, ew.

 

id say drop everything except the H and dont use more than 2 colors for a throw up and drop all the faces.

 

thx 4 the input, anyone else have constructive criticism?

 

just keep practicing.these things take time.if your really serious about writing and keep at it itll come to you eventually

 

saps lok

 

hi piggies

 

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evil-- i did in a friends room

 

I thought some of the hire ones are dope, except for the faces. I like coloring in my throwups. If you have the time, paint, and the spot, why not? it's good practice.

izoe - dope, but what's in the middle of the i?

evil - cool, I still can't do the shiny 3d effect.


here's Faim getting better over a few weeks.

first throwie


first with two fill colors


first fade attempt


my favorite


the last one was better haha


never sketched this one

 

can someone explain to me how to upload flix so they appear big in my message and you dont have to click the little link at the bottom

 

Faim, I like what your doing, your first throwie was was better than mine....try sticking with the bright colors, it makes it alot more noticable/readable... good contrast where as the green fills with dark outlines aren't as

 

Faim, the one you said is your favorite, is definitely the best out of that group, try and keep all your letters the same size, and if u can, get your hands on some caps, cuz the green shine is too big on the one above yer fave...
Millzy, use your blackbook and practice, a LOT.. the more u practice the more comfortable you'll get with the style your trying to portray

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use imageshack, and use the resize option... then when it's uploaded, copy and paste the direct link, not the thumbnail one... if u need more help chek the sticky on this

 

hipe- throw up colors are white fill , black outline - green fade. dont fuck wiht thos high contrasted colors (we can see all the details easy, fuck the details do the white fills and shit) and do the two colors or more worse 3 color fills for toss looks bad. just do the toss fade it and dont fuck wiht it anymore all thos bubbles fuck them

 

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^^^^^^^dope bro!

 

thanks man

 

straight and effin cool

 

and you think this is crits? don't be a hypocrite